College-Level Writing in the Humanities: A WWII-Era Short Story by Heinrich Böll
What's included
8 live meetings
6 in-class hoursHomework
2-4 hours per week. You can expect to spend between 2 and 4 hours per week on the Guided Work portion of this class. (This will, of course, vary for each student.) Guided Work will include… + reading the short story + taking notes + assessing sample thesis statements, topic sentences, & analysis paragraphs + reading a sample “A” paper + drafting portions of your paper + revising, editing, & proofing your paper In class, we will discuss how best to structure your study and work time to make sure you are making steady progress toward your goal of a finished, high-quality paper.Assessment
After you have turned in the final version of your paper at the end of the class, I will send you a grading sheet with written feedback and your score.Grading
A Class Report will be provided to families at the end of the class. It will include 1) information on the class content, 2) instructor credentials, 3) student paper grade, and 4) a narrative on the student's accomplishments in the class. If you need a letter grade for the class, I can provide that. If you need any additional information for your homeschooling transcript or for your high school guidance counselor, just let me know.Class Experience
Advanced Level
If you are a college-bound teen looking for a top-notch writing experience, you’re in the right place! This class gives you the chance to work… + at the college level + with a group of your peers + on a topic of significance The special topic of this class is a short story by German author Heinrich Böll, “Stranger, Bear Word to the Spartans We....” The text is intriguing and multilayered, ripe for class discussion and for the deeper thought into which academic writing can bring us. I think you’ll find it riveting! The class follows a hybrid model, with one live session per week plus guided work assignments that expertly lead you through the paper-writing process. We will do college-level work in this class, but we will go at a slower pace than that of a typical college class. We will write just one 4-5 page paper over the 8 weeks of class. We will break it down into micro-steps. And all along the way, I will make sure you get the support and instruction you need to flourish. Please read more below for class details. I so much hope you’ll join us! --Dr. Bjornstad ------------ PROVEN RESULTS Students who take my classes see results! + By the end of the 8 weeks of College-Level Writing in the Humanities, you’ll have successfully written a 4-5 page paper similar to papers students write during their freshman or sophomore years in college. I think you’ll be surprised by the quick progress you’ll make and how proficient of an academic writer you’ll become. The learning experiences I’ve created for this class set you up for a high-quality result. Some of my favorite parent reviews say it best: - “Our daughter is learning so much from Dr. Bjornstad.” - “As parents, we enjoy watching their skill build as the year progresses.” - “Dr. Bjornstad is a wonderful educator who truly cares about her students and their success.” ------------ EXPERT INSTRUCTION I am an expert instructor with 25+ years of experience. You can see the details of my teaching credentials in the “Teacher Expertise” dropdown and on my profile page (https://outschool.com/teachers/Jennifer-Bjornstad). A few highlights: - I have a PhD in German literature. - I was a tenured professor at Valparaiso University. - I am a licensed high school teacher. - I homeschooled my own son for several years. - I have written a number of scholarly articles published in high-profile academic journals. - I have taught classes with a substantial writing component many, many times. I am highly qualified as a writing instructor. I’m also an approachable and welcoming teacher—our virtual classroom is a lively, warm, and congenial place. ---------- PRICING & CLASS VALUE The cost of the 8-week session is $800. Although we meet just one day a week as a group, the learning material and support your learner receives (through the live session & the guided work component) is equivalent to that of a 3-day-a-week class. Note to Families: I know that the cost of this class represents a significant investment in your learner’s education. The class price includes… + high-quality, expert instruction + instructor-created lesson plans, activities, & materials + personalized video feedback on your learner’s written work, including 1) smaller assignments, 2) rough draft, and 3) final paper + close communication via the once-a-week Family Letter and Outschool messages + individualized feedback on your learner’s accomplishments via a Class Report Teaching on Outschool is my full-time job. I take my work seriously and spend a lot of time thinking about how best to support each learner. I teach just a small number of students per year, so you can be sure your child is getting the personalized attention that builds confidence, honors each student’s unique abilities, and leads to success. ---------- WHY TAKE A COLLEGE-LEVEL WRITING CLASS? Well, pretty much every class in college involves writing. For those classes you take in the humanities (history, philosophy, world language, literature, art, music, film studies), you will most likely need to write a paper of some sort every few weeks. And…writing is hard! Let’s just say it like it is. Writing is difficult work. It’s difficult because it’s worthwhile: writing is one the best tasks we can take on to get ourselves to think—clearly, consistently, accurately, deeply. So it makes sense to prepare yourself ahead of time by taking a high-level writing class right now. ---------- SPECIAL TOPIC: A GERMAN POSTWAR STORY BY HEINRICH BÖLL In this class, we will base our investigations on the work of Heinrich Böll (1917-1985), a gifted writer and influential thinker. His literary wrestlings with the consequences of war remain relevant to this day. We will read and discuss Böll’s short story “Stranger, Bear Word to the Spartans We...” (1950). Told from a tightly focused first-person perspective, the story follows just a few hours in the life of a young man who has been brought, badly wounded, from the field of battle to his former school, which has been turned into a makeshift military hospital. (The story’s title is an ironic reference to the Epitaph of Simonides, written in honor of the Spartans who fought in the Battle of Thermopylae in 480 BCE.) Heinrich Böll is a master of the craft of the short story, and this is one of his very best. ---------- THE MAJOR ASSIGNMENT In this 8-week class, the major assignment is to write a 4-5 page paper on “Stranger, Bear Word to the Spartans We...” by Heinrich Böll. Your paper will focus on one of two possible motifs: 1) the journey or 2) milk. These motifs are central to the beauty and power of the story. Each reader of the story comes to it with a different perspective, so that gives you lots of room for interpretation and for putting your own stamp on one of these topics. I can’t wait to see what you come up with! ---------- UNIQUE HYBRID FORMAT: LIVE SESSION + GUIDED WORK The class follows a hybrid format, with two components: 1) Each week, we come together in our Live Session to explore the big ideas in the text, workshop our drafts in progress, and offer mutual encouragement. 2) During the week, you work individually on the Guided Work assignments. I will teach you via a pre-recorded video. You will do a follow-up worksheet with examples. Then you’ll apply what you’ve learned to your paper-in-progress. ---------- A PROCESS-ORIENTED APPROACH In this class, we’ll use a process-oriented approach to writing. You will be making a final product, of course (your paper!), but we will place a strong focus on the process of creation and all of the intermediate steps that get you to your final, successful product. Here are some of the steps of the writing process we will work on together: - writing a thesis statement - choosing an argument structure, key terms, & main points - writing strong topic sentences - writing information-rich paragraphs - incorporating the work of others, using the they say/I say structure - citing the work of others, using MLA format - writing a strong concluding analysis paragraph to answer the “so what?” question - revising, editing, proofing I know that listing out all of the steps like this can make the process look daunting or rigid. Don’t worry: we won’t lock you into one specific writing mode or method. Love outlines? OK, go with it. Hate outlines? No problem, find another way to make a rough plan. I will be offering information on the components of a high-quality finished paper in the humanities and guiding you through some of the steps it takes to get there. But writing a paper is almost always a very messy business, with a lot of trials, re-thinking, adjustments, and maybe even tears! (Believe me, I’ve been there.) How you get to a successful final product is ultimately up to you, and each project often has its own unique path to greatness. ---------- PERSONALIZED VIDEO FEEDBACK On 6 days, you will submit written work (paper drafts or draft components). Following each of these due dates, I will send you a personalized video with your assignment feedback. This feedback is not meant to be evaluative (how good are you?) but rather is directed toward helping you improve your writing (what is great about your paper so far? what can be changed to make it more clear, communicative, persuasive, engaging?). ---------- INTERACTIVE LEARNING & CLASSROOM COMMUNITY This class, designed especially for teen learners, uses a highly interactive approach to the study of English Language Arts. Lots of activities, exercises, and assignments will keep you on your toes and assure that you’re becoming a better and better writer each day. I focus on getting everyone involved at the level they feel comfortable with, asking for lots of volunteers and giving everyone a chance to participate. You will get a lot of practice, and you will learn quickly! Class activities will include a mix of whole-class discussions, small-group or partner activities, and individual work. My teaching style is warm & friendly but also challenging. We will work hard in this class, because I know that you want to learn! But we’ll have a lot of fun together, too—trying our best, making mistakes, and trying again. That’s the learning process. My students have always complimented me on my extreme readiness to help. I want students to succeed, and I find ways to help get them there. ---------- COMMON CORE STANDARDS This class addresses many of the writing standards in the Common Core: https://www.thecorestandards.org/ELA-Literacy Grade 9-10 Standards: CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.W.9-10.1.A CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.W.9-10.1.B CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.W.9-10.1.C CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.W.9-10.1.D CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.W.9-10.1.E CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.W.9-10.4 CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.W.9-10.5 Grade 11-12 Standards: CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.W.11-12.1.A CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.W.11-12.1.B CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.W.11-12.1.C CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.W.11-12.1.D CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.W.11-12.1.E CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.W.11-12.4 CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.W.11-12.5 ----- FAQ—FOR FAMILIES Q: Why do the students READ a short story in a WRITING class? A: Writing at the college level almost always takes place in the context of readings, discussions, and other assignments around a particular topic, so that’s what we do in this class, as well. I suppose there’s a place for just picking whatever topic you like and writing about it, but in my experience, that doesn’t come up in the real college setting very often. Q: My learner needs a class on PERSUASIVE/ARGUMENTATIVE writing. Is this it? A: Yes! The classes in the College-Level Writing in the Humanities series are all based on the type of paper that is often referred to as a persuasive or an argumentative paper. Students make a claim, support it with reasoning and evidence, and explain the significance of that claim. (This paper in this particular class is also a LITERATURE INTERPRETATION/LITERARY ANALYSIS paper.) Q: Does it matter that you are a TRAINED TEACHER? A: I sure think it does! I have spent my career reading, thinking, and talking about teaching methods then putting those ideas into practice in the classroom. I am a member of the MLA (Modern Language Association). I have attended and presented at dozens of teacher conferences and have published articles on pedagogical topics. All of this means that I am familiar with best practices and current thinking on effective teaching methods and that I’m able to use this knowledge to help lead your learner to success. Q: What experience do you have as a WRITING INSTRUCTOR? A: I’ve coached hundreds of college students to write successful academic papers. I’m an expert at creating writing assignments and exercises, leading classroom discussions, teaching about the writing process, giving high-quality feedback, and helping students close in on a finished draft they can be proud of. Q: Do you have expertise in the CLASS TOPIC? A: Yes, I do. I have read much of Heinrich Böll’s oeuvre, including many, many of his short stories. I wrote a scholarly article on “Stranger, Bear Word to the Spartans We...” which was published in The German Quarterly. This is a topic I’ve thought about, written about, and taught many times before. Q: Is this a good class for a GIFTED/TALENTED student? A: Absolutely. We do high-level work in this class, and the writing assignment is adjustable to fit the challenge needed for each learner. Q: Is this a good class for a student who is a RELUCTANT WRITER? A: Absolutely. Because we work through the process together, step by step, your learner will have the support they need to achieve writing success. Q: Can we count this class for HIGH SCHOOL CREDIT? A: Quite possibly. The work we do in this class is the equivalent of a 3-day-a-week, academic quarter class. We cover many of the English Language Arts (ELA) standards on writing. If you need information to add to your homeschooling transcript or to bring to your high school guidance counselor, just let me know. Q: I have more questions. Can we GET TOGETHER to talk? A: Yes, please! I love getting together with learners and their families to learn about their particular questions, concerns, and needs. Send me a time that works for you, and we can do an Open House session: https://outschool.com/classes/german-placement-assessment-open-house-8GBQiwIM?refuid=zBNxOaog.
Learning Goals
Students will be able to SUMMARIZE the postwar situation in Germany in the late 40s
Students will be able to DISCUSS “Stranger, Bear Word to the Spartans We...” in an informed way
Syllabus
Curriculum
Follows Teacher-Created CurriculumStandards
Aligned with Common Core State Standards (CCSS)8 Lessons
over 8 WeeksLesson 1:
Introduction
45 mins online live lesson
Lesson 2:
Thesis Statements & Preview Statements
45 mins online live lesson
Lesson 3:
Key Terms, Argument Structure, & Main Points
45 mins online live lesson
Lesson 4:
Topic Sentences
45 mins online live lesson
Other Details
Learning Needs
Students in this class receive individualized attention that can address unique learning needs. The asynchronous portions of the class, especially, allow students to work at their own pace or to repeat instruction as necessary.
Parental Guidance
The text we read in this class, “Stranger, Bear Word to the Spartans We...,”
is a beautifully written story about a dreadful topic—the confusion and physical pain that many young men went through in wartime Germany.
Items to note as you decide whether this is the class for your learner:
- There is a small amount of swearing among the soldiers.
- There is a depiction of the young man’s substantial injuries and his shocked reaction to them.
- The young man smokes. (The juxtaposed motifs of cigarettes and milk are central to the story’s theme of abrupt, enforced adulthood.)
- Heinrich Böll was Catholic; one anecdote in the story involves a cross that remains on the wall of the school, which was formerly named St. Thomas’s.
The narrative definitely takes an anti-war stance.
You can take a look at the story here: https://nelligennet.com/wanderer.html
Pre-Requisites
We will be working at an advanced level of thought, argument, and written expression, but no previous experience is required to do well in this class.
Teacher expertise and credentials
2 Teaching Certificates
Indiana Teaching Certificate in English/Language Arts
Indiana Teaching Certificate in Foreign Language
Doctoral Degree in Foreign Language from University of Wisconsin-Madison
I have been teaching German, composition, and arts & humanities for more than 25 years. I have a PhD in German Literature and was the 2014 Indiana German Collegiate Teacher of the Year. I bring first-rate content knowledge and pedagogical expertise to the online classroom, plus a genuine love of working with young learners.
Because I have extensive experience at the college level, I know just where high school students are headed and can expertly guide them as they prepare themselves for the next step.
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Live Group Course
$800
for 8 classes1x per week, 8 weeks
45 min
Live video meetings
Ages: 15-18
4-9 learners per class