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完善段落,超越基礎,高級風格(附回饋)

由 20 位學習者完成
年齡 11-16
自訂進度課程
學生將透過 8 種具體策略加強寫作技巧,以提高寫作敘述性、資訊性、比較/對比和說服性段落的風格。非常適合中級作家的掙扎。
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4 預錄課程
4 週
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作業
每週 1-2 小時. Students will complete two paragraphs each lesson, applying the writing strategies that are taught and modeled. Please note that there are no firm due dates / deadlines in this class. Students are welcome to complete the work on their own schedule and I will happily give feedback at any time.
評估
Students who submit writing will receive personalized video feedback, outlining strengths and opportunities for growth. This can be done at any time after the videos and assignments are given. There are no set deadlines / due dates for this class.
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課堂經歷

英語程度 - B1
美國 6 - 9 年級
Beginner - Intermediate 等級
Once basic writing skills are mastered, what comes next? After a student learns principles like paragraphs are composed of a topic sentence, supporting details, and a concluding sentence, or an essay is an introduction, body paragraphs, and a concluding paragraphs, how do we build onto that? How do we make sure that the writing sounds more in-depth and complex? For some students, this is a natural process. But for the vast majority of students, learning specific strategies is what helps them move from simple and basic to more mature writing.  Many of those strategies are explicitly taught in this class. 

In this SELF-PACED / ASYNCHRONOUS course, students will expand on basic writing skills to become skilled, confident, independent writers.  They will follow steps to write narrative, informative / explanatory, compare / contrast (a specific type of informative writing), and persuasive paragraphs, responding to a variety of writing prompts. This class will go beyond the basics to allow learners to grow in their ability to communicate descriptively, specifically, and effectively to the reader, while writing in different styles. Over the entire class students will learn eight specific, practical strategies to improve the quality of their writing. This class focuses on paragraphs, but these techniques can be applied to all writing, including short answer test questions, essays, and creative writing.

Each lesson provides with two short videos explaining and modeling different writing strategies. Along with each strategy, they will be given a set of three writing prompts to choose from to practice incorporating the strategy/style from the lesson. Learners are invited to share their paragraphs with me to receive direct, personalized video feedback on their writing. 

Lesson 1: Paragraph Basics (optional, students with a firm grasp in paragraph writing are welcome to skip this video)
Narrative Paragraphs (Part 1: exploding the moment / focusing details, Part 2: show don't tell)

Lesson 2: General Informative Paragraphs (Part 1: clear topic and concluding sentences, Part 2: proper use of pronouns)

Lesson 3: Compare / Contrast Paragraphs (Part 1: varying sentence length, Part 2: descriptive clauses)

Lesson 4: Persuasive Paragraphs (Part 1: avoiding second person "you" with a special focus on implied / understood second person, Part 2: tone)

Learners will grow in their understanding of how to apply different style elements to their writing, and will gain greater confidence in their writing ability.  In order to do well in this class students should have an idea of how to write a simple paragraph, although that will be covered in the first video lesson.  

Students will receive personalized video feedback for each submitted piece of writing, outlining specific areas of strength and opportunities for growth. Work will generally receive feedback within forty-eight hours. 

A complement to this class is Essay Essentials: Paragraph Practice, Beyond the Basics (FLEX). The format is the same but writing elements are a bit more simplistic. It is not a prerequisite to this class, and could be taken before or after this class. 
https://outschool.com/classes/essay-essentials-perfecting-the-paragraph-beyond-the-basics-flex-NQnKtzaA

If you are looking for a live version of this class, Essay Essentials: Paragraph Practice, Beyond the Basics covers these key principles and more:
https://outschool.com/classes/essay-essentials-paragraph-practice-writing-club-beyond-the-basics-kuL21g6V

學習目標

Students will grow in their ability to independently apply style strategies to their writing.
Students will learn eight specific strategies for improving the quality of their writing during this course, which can be applied to all types of writing.

教學大綱

4 課程
超過 4 週
課 1:
Narrative Paragraphs
 Paragraph Basics (optional, students with a firm grasp in paragraph writing are welcome to skip this video)
Narrative Paragraphs (Lesson 1: exploding the moment / focusing details; Lesson 2: show don't tell) 
課 2:
Informative Paragraphs
 General Informative Paragraphs (Lesson 3: clear topic and concluding sentences, Lesson 4: proper use of pronouns) 
課 3:
Informative Compare / Contrast Paragraphs
 Compare / Contrast Paragraphs (Lesson 5: varying sentence length, Lesson 6: descriptive clauses) 
課 4:
Persuasive Paragraphs
 Persuasive Paragraphs (Lesson 7: avoiding second person "you" with a special focus on implied / understood second person, Lesson 8: tone) 

其他詳情

學習需求
This class is easily adaptable to students with dyslexia, ADHD, ASD, dysgraphia, etc. Students can use any adaptive technologies including, but not limited to, talk to type. Lessons are broken down in manageable sections.
父母的引導和規範
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先決條件
Students should be able to write a simple paragraph on their own, although there is a refresher on those concepts in the first lesson.
供應清單
Students need to be able to write their own paragraphs. They can do this with paper and a writing untensil (pencil, pen, etc), but are also welcome to type instead of hand-write paragraphs.
外部資源
學習者無需使用標準 Outschool 工具以外的任何應用程式或網站。
來源
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學士學位 在 英語 從 University of Mississippi
I have a Bachelor of Arts in English, and held a Professional Teaching Certificate in Florida to teach English in grades 6-12.  For the past several years I have taught small group English classes, including how to write paragraphs and essays.  

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