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寫作俱樂部:一次一句話 - 一隻狗的故事

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年齡 7-11
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在這個為期五週的自定進度課程中,學生將學習如何撰寫一篇高品質的論文,其中包含描述性和強有力的形容詞、副詞、隱喻、頭韻、可悲的謬誤、詞彙等。
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美國 2 - 5 年級
Writing can often seem daunting and so often an entire writing piece or story is the major outcome of a writing lesson. This is where I believe a change needs to happen. In order for students to feel confident in their writing they need to feel equipped with techniques, tools and ideas to create a successful sentence. Writing is made up of many sentences. Once a learner is confident in various writing techniques, they can apply this to any story or writing piece. In each class we will use a method called sentence stacking. This method of writing is used in many successful schools throughout the United Kingdom. An idea or writing extract is looked at and modelled. The techniques used in the model is discussed and students brainstorm various ways to use this technique in different ways and in their own words. Ideas are gathered between all the students and then a sentence is built.  Together and independently we will then create effective and engaging sentences.  This class is open to students of all writing abilities however, students should be able to write a simple sentence by themselves. Some of the techniques we look at is repetition, similes, onomatopoeia, alliteration, rhyming, personification, adjectives, adverbs, complex sentences and adverbial phrases to name a few. 

In this class students will be writing a lovely and heartwarming story about a dog called Winston. We will be writing from Winston's perspective. Winston starts of as a street dog but then gets taken in my a kind and wonderful man that we will call Dad. Dad and Winston have this perfect life until everything changes- Winston feels replaced by someone else. However- this eventually is not a bad thing. Come and join the journey and get immersed into this beautiful story. We will be watching short video clips from an animated video called Feast to inspire our writing. We will then analyse the clip and turn it into writing. I will explain and model exactly how to do this and students can send in their writing throughout the week. Students can complete each lesson in their own time, however if students pause the lessons and write during the lesson time it should take no longer than 45 - 60 minutes per lesson.

 I will provide feedback within the week that it is submitted. Feedback will be a personal video recording with comments about the work handed in. I have an encouraging teaching style and my feedback will also be constructive and encouraging. 

By the end of the fifth week (if two lessons are completed each week) each student will have a beautifully written, top-quality essay that will be full of important writing tools. They will be able to use this as a model for all future stories.  Each lesson will show students how to write at least three incredible sentences using certain writing techniques. Students are welcome to send in their weekly writing at anytime during the week. 

This story is for a Year 3 (UK level- 7-8 years old) student. If English is not a student's first language or if the student struggles with writing then this will be perfect for older students.

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10 課程
超過 5 週
課 1:
A crinkle cut chip on a cold night
 Write effective sentences for our story  using adverbial phrases, alliteration and dialogue 
課 2:
Breakfast in a new bowl
 Write effective sentences for our story using prepositions and noun phrases,  exploring the sense of taste and writing about feelings. 
課 3:
All change with a new house guest
 Write effective sentences for our story  using repetition for effect, inner thought and once again repetition for effect 
課 4:
Anger erupts
 Write effective sentences for our story  using similes, action words and feeling words 

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Hello, my name is Carlin King. I am a Year 1 teacher living and working in the United Kingdom. I have been a primary school teacher for more than ten years and love being part of the formative years. I have been trained in a number of different phonetic programmes including RWInc (Read, Write Inc). 

My greatest passion is teaching children to read and write. As a child, I loved to write stories. I found it came naturally to me as I was a total book worm. However, as a teacher, I have seen that many children struggle with creativity, vocabulary and sentence structure when it comes to their writing. When children have both a writing model and an interest in the subject matter - that is when creative writing takes shape. Engaging and exciting themes, fun and well-written books and fascinating historical events and characters are just some of the subjects I like to use in my writing lessons. These classes will be for primary school children roughly between the ages of 5-8. Basic phonetic knowledge needs to be there as we can then sound out and build sentences together.  

I am a firm believer in teaching phonics when it comes to fluent and confident reading. I have been teaching children to read throughout my teaching career and have had many experiences in different phonetic programmes. I decided to create my own phonic reading scheme, using what I know works, and make it engaging and exciting for children.
I believe teaching is about having fun and allowing children to get emersed in a subject. As a teacher, I strive to be a guide - allowing children to let their interest and curiosity drive their learning. As a child, I loved school and was privileged to go to more than one school as I spent my childhood living in different parts of Africa. I was born in Nambia and then moved to Ghana when I was nine years old.  As a teenager, I attended a wonderful boarding school in South Africa. I now live in England with my husband and two gorgeous babies.

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