大學論文針對性修改
在這個一次性的一對一課程中，我將提供具體的、可操作的回饋，使大學論文更加清晰、描述性和深思熟慮。
Beth Orsini
平均評分：
5.0
評論數量：(8)
包含什麼
按需滿足
根據需要安排會議45 分鐘
每次會話教師支持
作業
每週 1 小時. Learners will have revisions to make on their essay. I do not need to see it again unless the learner would like to schedule a follow-up session.評估
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課堂經歷
英語程度 - 未知
美國等級 11 - 12
Now is the time of year when many high school seniors are applying to colleges. If you're like most, one of the most stressful parts of this process is writing the essay, or personal statement. Whether you're using the Common App or have a specific question to answer, this is your chance to show the admissions staff WHO YOU ARE. The goal of this one-time class is to take what you already have, and make it better. I will provide specific, targeted feedback for you. Yes, I will help with grammar and typos, but the revision process is about helping you express yourself in the clearest, most engaging way possible. Oftentimes, revision is left to the last minute, and there is no time to rework your thoughts and ideas. That can be avoided with just one session of targeted revision. After we meet, I am happy to have a DISCOUNTED follow-up session with you! Schedule that session at your convenience with coupon code provided at the end of our first session.
學習目標
Learners will leave the session with specific revision feedback to continue working on their essays. This could include changes with organization, detail, focus, word choice or sentence structure, author's voice, etc.
其他詳情
父母的引導和規範
For me to help with this, the learner will need to share their current work--preferably through Google docs. If the student doesn't have a Google account, they can share it through Outschool as an attachment.
供應清單
Learner will need to have a working copy of their essay, or at least a brainstorm of possible ideas.
外部資源
除了 Outschool 教室外，本課程也使用：
已加入 July, 2022
5.0
8評論
教師專業知識和證書
麻薩諸塞州 教學證書 在 英語/語言藝術
Hi, I'm Beth! I have been teaching middle school ELA for over 15 years, and am certified for grades 5-12. Reading and writing are two of my greatest passions. I love books so much that I have even opened up my own pop-up bookshop!
My classes are all about supporting and guiding readers-writers-thinkers. We think about writing as a craft. We dig deep into meanings and connection. And, we celebrate good writing--whether our own or a favorite author's. My reading classes are steeped in discussion and help with comprehension, critical thinking, and evidence-based conclusions. Writing classes are interactive, using models and practicing writing and revising.
When I'm not teaching, I am busy hanging with my fam. I have two teenage girls (who keep me on my toes), and two cats whose hobbies are: sleeping in the sun, meowing for food, and chasing each other around the house. I enjoy traveling, hiking, weight-training, reading, and sharing books. One day I hope to write a children's book based on my cats, entitled, "Mr. Plumber and the Worm". Join one of my classes and ask me why!評論
現場一對一課程
US$75
每次會話按需求上課
45 分鐘
有1 為學習者完成此課程
即時視訊會議
年齡: 16-18
