US$175
for 4 classes包含什麼
4 現場會議
3 小時 40 分鐘 上課時間作業
每週 2-4 小時. Students will write a college essay and will need additional time outside of class to do so.評分
Your assessment will come from the college in the form of an acceptance offer! #accepted我們無法翻譯此文,請刷新頁面並再試一次。
課堂經歷
英語程度 - B2+
美國 11 - 12 年級
Beginner - Advanced 等級
🚨 Bonuses For This Class: -includes unlimited email support, editing, and feedback for weeks and months as students continue to edit their essays. -The 𝗼𝗻𝗲-𝗼𝗻-𝗼𝗻𝗲 𝗴𝘂𝗶𝗱𝗮𝗻𝗰𝗲 in breakout rooms is what separates this class from others, and students get personalized support. **Check the schedule. Most classes meet twice per week, but some meet over a period of weeks.** If writing the college application or scholarship essay is weighing on you, and you don't know how to get started, this class is for you. I will guide them, giving feedback and encouragement throughout the process. Price also includes unlimited, ongoing editing and feedback beyond the conclusion of class until the essay is polished and ready to send! I have helped countless students begin their college journey throughout the years, and every minute is worth it when I get the email from previous students with the message, "I got it!" I also help students with their medical school applications and adults with their work applications. I have launched my oldest two sons into college and got to see what the process was like from the mom's perspective. Moms, Dads, and students--I've got you! I have developed some great tricks and tools to inspire, equip, and support! ❶ The biggest struggle students have with the college essay is getting started! The best way to do that is to take this class or the FLEX version (linked here). These two classes build a foundation, and we will make great progress here! https://outschool.com/classes/college-application-essays-get-it-done-KvXF2Zsa?usid=0BAnv5zn&signup=true&utm_campaign=share_activity_link ❷ The next problem a student has is developing the idea and fleshing it out as a personal narrative. In this class, students have 1-1 time with Mrs. Lemons in breakout rooms during workshop time. If they need more 1-1 time, it's available at a discounted rate. Just ask. (linked below). Students get to talk through their ideas, and our questioning technique helps them generate ideas. It is awesome to see students get over this massive hurdle! To meet 1-1 or with a small group of students, send in a request here: https://outschool.com/classes/college-application-essays-individualized-or-small-group-support-dxTms3oE?usid=0BAnv5zn&signup=true&utm_campaign=share_activity_link ❸ After that, students need help with revisions and edits. We can do this over email for as long as they need (included free with the cost of this class). Included in the price of all our college essay classes is unlimited, ongoing email support! ❹ Once that's done, it's time to fine-tune and add some wow factor to the essay. For example, students may need help with descriptive writing, figurative language, blending narrative elements, and crafting sentences that stand out from almost all other high school writers. 🎓 Students, you will learn how to research your audience and how to prepare, draft, revise, and edit an essay to get the results you want. Class time involves direct instruction with a dash of inspiration, and you will have individual workshop time with feedback from the instructor. 💯 Students will share their final drafts with their instructor, who will continue to help edit beyond the conclusion of this class until they have one polished essay, ready to send! This may extend for weeks. This unlimited, ongoing support is free of charge. 𝑭𝒐𝒓 𝒇𝒖𝒓𝒕𝒉𝒆𝒓 𝒍𝒊𝒗𝒆 𝟭-𝟭 𝒔𝒖𝒑𝒑𝒐𝒓𝒕 𝒃𝒚 𝒗𝒊𝒅𝒆𝒐 𝒄𝒉𝒂𝒕, 𝒑𝒍𝒆𝒂𝒔𝒆 𝒓𝒆𝒒𝒖𝒆𝒔𝒕 𝒂 𝒕𝒊𝒎𝒆 𝒊𝒏 𝒕𝒉𝒆 𝒄𝒍𝒂𝒔𝒔 "𝑪𝒐𝒍𝒍𝒆𝒈𝒆 𝑨𝒑𝒑𝒍𝒊𝒄𝒂𝒕𝒊𝒐𝒏 𝑬𝒔𝒔𝒂𝒚𝒔--𝑷𝒆𝒓𝒔𝒐𝒏𝒂𝒍 𝑻𝒖𝒕𝒐𝒓𝒊𝒏𝒈." https://outschool.com/classes/college-application-essays-personal-tutoring-dxTms3oE?usid=0BAnv5zn&signup=true&utm_campaign=share_activity_link 𝑭𝒐𝒓 𝒂 𝒔𝒆𝒍𝒇-𝒑𝒂𝒄𝒆𝒅 𝒗𝒆𝒓𝒔𝒊𝒐𝒏 𝒐𝒇 𝒕𝒉𝒊𝒔 𝒄𝒍𝒂𝒔𝒔, 𝒆𝒏𝒓𝒐𝒍𝒍 𝒉𝒆𝒓𝒆: https://outschool.com/classes/college-application-essays-guidance-and-support-to-get-the-college-essay-done-KvXF2Zsa?usid=0BAnv5zn&signup=true&utm_campaign=share_activity_link 🍋 𝙏𝙝𝙚 𝙇𝙚𝙢𝙤𝙣𝙨-𝘼𝙞𝙙 𝙒𝙖𝙮 🍋 𝐋𝐞𝐚𝐫𝐧 𝐦𝐨𝐫𝐞 𝐚𝐛𝐨𝐮𝐭 𝐋𝐞𝐦𝐨𝐧𝐬-𝐀𝐢𝐝, 𝐨𝐮𝐫 𝐩𝐡𝐢𝐥𝐨𝐬𝐨𝐩𝐡𝐲, 𝐚𝐧𝐝 𝐨𝐮𝐫 𝐭𝐞𝐚𝐜𝐡𝐞𝐫𝐬! CLICK THROUGH TO GET A SURPRISE COUPON CODE! https://docs.google.com/document/d/1JwlFnta1ZYAlNn8t2GMMA8Bb6dd0ums1IbdtpzZwuRc/edit?usp=sharing
學習目標
Students will finish a draft of their college essay!
Students have unlimited email access to the instructor who will give feedback until the application is sent.
教學大綱
課程
遵循 Teacher-Created 課程標準
與 State-Specific Standards對齊4 課程
超過 2 週課 1:
𝐃𝐞𝐯𝐞𝐥𝐨𝐩 𝐚 𝐓𝐨𝐩𝐢𝐜
Learn what colleges and universities look for in college essays. Students begin brainstorming their essay's topic, audience expectations, and how their strengths fit their prospective school. Students develop a topic idea to illustrate those character traits in a story that is narrow, appropriate, and engaging. They go through a 1-2 hour exercise just to develop a story idea! This lesson includes guidance through a writing guide with video teaching, brainstorming, and two sample essays.
55 分鐘線上直播課
1 作業
課 2:
𝐖𝐡𝐨 𝐂𝐚𝐫𝐞𝐬? 𝐒𝐨-𝐖𝐡𝐚𝐭?
The instructor inspires them to think deeply about who they are and the significance of their essay's topic. They watch video teaching, read two sample essays, and have a little Hollywood inspiration to go deeper into their topic for its significance. Students complete more exercises to get them thinking deeper.
55 分鐘線上直播課
1 作業
課 3:
𝐃𝐫𝐚𝐟𝐭 𝐃𝐚𝐲!
This is an "ah-ha" module! Students finally start to understand how to be transparent and authentic and to communicate the significance of their experience. Again, they see on film how to go deeper, read a sample essay, and have video teaching how to make their essays memorable. They finally draft their essays now that they've done the deep thinking and planning.
55 分鐘線上直播課
1 作業
課 4:
𝐓𝐡𝐞 𝐂𝐨𝐧𝐜𝐥𝐮𝐬𝐢𝐨𝐧, 𝐑𝐞𝐯𝐢𝐬𝐢𝐨𝐧𝐬, & 𝐄𝐝𝐢𝐭𝐬- 𝐓𝐡𝐞 𝐖𝐨𝐰!
Now that they have a draft, they learn how to write a conclusion that brings closure, satisfaction, and an emotional connection with their reader. When complete, they revise and edit their essays for sentence fluency. They learn some simple tricks to use in the revision process to make their sentence structure stand out from the rest.
55 分鐘線上直播課
1 作業
其他詳情
供應清單
Students should have at least one university or college they want to attend and the writing prompt required for their college application.
外部資源
學習者無需使用標準 Outschool 工具以外的任何應用程式或網站。
提供自
教師專業知識和證書
7 老師有教師資格證
阿拉斯加州 教學證書 在 外語
賓州 教學證書 在 英語/語言藝術
紐約 教學證書 在 英語/語言藝術
賓州 教學證書 在 英語/語言藝術
華盛頓 教學證書 在 英語/語言藝術
華盛頓 教學證書 在 社會研究/歷史
華盛頓 教學證書 在 外語
北卡羅萊納 教學證書 在 英語/語言藝術
密蘇裡州 教學證書
田納西州 教學證書 在 科學
2 位教師有研究生學歷
碩士 在 教育 從 Liberty University
碩士 在 教育 從 Western Governors University
11 老師擁有學士學位
學士學位 由 Purdue University
學士學位 在 教育 從 Philadelphia College of Bible
學士學位 在 教育 從 Millersville University
學士學位 在 教育 從 Liberty University
學士學位 在 英語 從 Florida State University
學士學位 在 心理學 從 Catawba College
學士學位 在 早期兒童教育 從 Missouri State University
學士學位 在 音樂 從 Western Connecticut State University
學士學位 在 政治學與政府 從 Patrick Henry College
學士學位 在 生物學/生物科學 從 Middle Tennessee State University
學士學位 在 數學 從 University of Northwestern - St. Paul
The founder of Lemons-Aid, Mrs. Lemons has a B.A. in English and an M.Ed in Education Administration. She is certified to teach English, has a principal's license, and has many years of experience at every level. She also supervises teachers in their undergraduate and graduate level teacher preparation programs at Colorado Christian University. She is a teacher of teachers.
All teachers who teach this class have an appropriate degree, teaching experience, and training, giving your learner a teacher who is a content-area expert who loves kids. Mrs. Lemons is very selective and only hires the very best. They are star teachers!
評論
Lemons-Aid Learning 建議接下來的課程...
大學申請論文—個人化或小組支持
Lemons-Aid Learning
4.9
(693)
US$39 每班
團體課
1 週, 1/週, 25 分鐘
16-18
Lemons-Aid Learning的其他課程
Lemons-Aid Learning的其他課程
其他家長也喜歡
論文寫作基礎訓練營
Stephanie
4.8
(39)
US$13 每班
下次會議在 7:45 PM Tue 7/8
團體課
4 週, 2/週, 30 分鐘
6-11
高級創意論文寫作
Chrissie D
4.8
(302)
US$10 每班
下次會議在 2:15 PM Tue 4/15
團體課
12 週, 1/週, 30 分鐘
13-18
論文寫作練習--5段論文
Brandy Dahlen Yun and BE Education
4.9
(644)
US$15 每班
下次會議在 11:30 PM Wednesday
團體課
1/週, 25 分鐘
13-17
初學者創意論文寫作
Chrissie D
4.8
(302)
US$9 每班
下次會議在 3:45 PM Friday
團體課
12 週, 1/週, 30 分鐘
13-18
初級 5 段論文寫作
Chrissie D
4.8
(302)
US$9 每班
下次會議在 7:15 PM Thursday
團體課
11 週, 1/週, 30 分鐘
13-18
正式論文寫作基礎課程
Daysha Rae, M.Ed
4.9
(574)
US$22 每班
下次會議在 3 PM Wed 4/16
團體課
8 週, 1/週, 50 分鐘
12-16
創意5段論文寫作
Chrissie D
4.8
(302)
US$9 每班
下次會議在 9:15 PM Tue 4/29
團體課
10 週, 1/週, 30 分鐘
13-18
論文寫作幫助
Miss Amii
4.0
(1)
US$50 每堂課
一對一輔導
依需求開班
11-14
* 高級高中作文寫作營
Brandy Dahlen Yun and BE Education
4.9
(644)
US$25 每班
下次會議在 3 PM Mon 6/9
團體課
1 週, 4/週, 45 分鐘
13-18
中學作文寫作
Brandy Dahlen Yun and BE Education
4.9
(644)
US$18 每班
下次會議在 4 PM Wed 4/23
團體課
4 週, 1/週, 30 分鐘
11-14
高中論文寫作
Brandy Dahlen Yun and BE Education
4.9
(644)
US$22 每班
下次會議在 4 PM Mon 4/28
團體課
4 週, 1/週, 45 分鐘
14-18
掌握論文寫作
Michelle Smith
5.0
(2)
US$18 每班
團體課
5 週, 1/週, 30 分鐘
6-11
論文寫作要點:中學論文寫作導論(CEFR:B2)
Choreography by Rae
4.9
(644)
US$30 每班
下次會議在 8:30 PM Friday
團體課
6 週, 1/週, 55 分鐘
11-14
議論文和資訊論文寫作班 - 認證教師
Mari Devine Dunn, Ed.S.
4.9
(75)
US$15 每班
下次會議在 12 AM Wed 8/6
團體課
1/週, 30 分鐘
10-14
三個論文寫作技巧
Cath
4.9
(134)
US$12 每班
下次會議在 4 PM Mon 4/21
團體課
1 週, 1/週, 30 分鐘
11-16
不情願的作家到論文大師:正在進行的論文寫作課程
Teacher Kristin BA TEFL TESL
5.0
(43)
US$14 每班
下一堂課今天 2:40 PM
團體課
1/週, 45 分鐘
9-14