營地完美段落
學生會寫出一篇好的段落，然後透過修改將其變成一篇優秀的段落。
Jan Bergesen AKA Ms. B
平均評分：
4.9
評論數量：(911)
包含什麼
2 現場會議
1 小時 20 分鐘 上課時間作業
每週 1 小時. If the student didn't finish their first draft in the first class, they will be expected to finish it during the week before the second class.我們無法翻譯此文，請刷新頁面並再試一次。
課堂經歷
英語程度 - 未知
美國 3 - 6 年級
In this 2-day class, we will be learning how to write a GREAT paragraph. Each students will be expected to write a paragraph on their own, but I will model what they need to do. On the first day, each learner will brainstorm what to write about. Then each will come up with the bare bones of a good paragraph - topic sentence, 3 details, conclusion. On the second day, we will take that "good" paragraph, and turn it into a "great" one through revisions - by adding a grabber, switching out boring verbs for more vibrant ones, and adding descriptive adjectives and adverbs.
學習目標
Students will learn paragraph organization. But more important than that, they will see the importance of putting in a little extra effort and improving on their first draft through varying their sentences, choosing vivid verbs, and adding descriptive adjectives and adverbs.
其他詳情
供應清單
Lined paper and pencil
外部資源
學習者無需使用標準 Outschool 工具以外的任何應用程式或網站。
已加入 July, 2020
4.9
911評論
教師專業知識和證書
加州 教學證書 在 小學教育
Hello, my name is Jan Bergesen, but the kids at school call me Ms. B. I've been an elementary school teacher for 35 years. Through the years, I have successfully developed a variety of unique ways of teaching things many children find difficult. Whether it's multiplication facts, math word problems, how to draw a person, how to write a paragraph or essay, learning to do ventriloquism, or even how to juggle, there's nothing I like more than watching learning happen. Did you notice the juggling in that list? I was a national award winning professional clown for 15 years and can share from those experiences as well. With that kind of a background, you know I like to have a fun, lively, creative class! I'm looking forward to helping your child experience the joy of learning.評論
現場團體小班課程
US$30
用於 2 課程每週2次，共 1 週
40 分鐘
有1 位學習者完成此課程
即時視訊會議
年齡: 8-12
1-5 每班學員人數
