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Jan Bergesen AKA Ms. B
平均評分：4.9評論數量：(881)
學生會寫出一篇好的段落，然後透過修改將其變成一篇精彩的段落。
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美國等級 3 - 6
In this 2-day class, we will be learning how to write a GREAT paragraph. Each students will be expected to write a paragraph on their own, but I will model what they need to do. On the first day, each learner will brainstorm what to write about. Then each will come up with the bare bones of a good paragraph - topic sentence, 3 details, conclusion. On the second day, we will take that "good" paragraph, and turn it into a "great" one through revisions - by adding a grabber, switching out...
Students will learn paragraph organization. But more important than that, they will see the importance of putting in a little extra effort and improving on their first draft through varying their sentences, choosing vivid verbs, and adding descriptive adjectives and adverbs.
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If the student didn't finish their first draft in the first class, they will be expected to finish it during the week before the second class.0 - 1 每週課外時間
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Lined paper and pencil
學習者無需使用標準 Outschool 工具以外的任何應用程式或網站。
平均評分：4.9評論數量：(881)
Hello, my name is Jan Bergesen, but the kids at school call me Ms. B. I've been an elementary school teacher for 35 years. Through the years, I have successfully developed a variety of unique ways of teaching things many children find difficult....
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US$30
用於 2 課程2x 每週， 1 週
40 分鐘
由 1 學習者完成
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Ages: 8-12
1-5 每班學員人數
