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輕鬆成為 9-13 歲熟練作家 |四年級、五年級、六年級、七年級、八年級

我的 HOME GROWN 獲勝寫作公式將幫助您的孩子成為技藝精湛的作家。
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5 現場會議
4 小時 35 分鐘 上課時間
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每週 1-2 小時. This homework is optional but to get the most out of this class I would like to see up to 10 sentence examples using the newly acquired skill.
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A learner's progress will be informally assessed at the end of the class with recommendations for the next course of action.
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英語程度 - 未知
美國 4 - 7 年級
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 This class is suitable for students ages 9 - 13  who wish to learn how to write easily and effectively with the goal to becoming  highly competent and impressive writers acheiving high scores in all subject areas.  Below are some examples of how your sentences will improve over time. So a sentence like:

The squirrels in my yard always chase the birds   
will become:
The FURRY, GREY squirrels in my yard always chase the SUMMER birds. (Using strong adjectives)

I love cooling down by eating ice-cream in the summer
will become:
EATING ice-cream in the summer helps me stay cool. (-ING- sentence starter)


Learners will learn using a step by step approach and immediately have the opportunity to practice their newly acquired skill.
You are welcome to join at any point for just one week or for the whole five week program
Parents will have an outline of the skill taught at the end of each lesson so as to encourage their child to use said skills in their various school assignments/homework.
I will work off google slides, which all learners will have access to for due reference.
Learners will be able to ask questions during class and can email me  Monday-Friday 9:00-5:00.


===COURSE OUTLINE===

1. BANNED WORDS 

Students will improve their writing instantly by eliminating banned words and replacing them with strong VERBS, ADJECTIVES and NOUNS.

***A reference list of Banned words will be made available.

2. DROPPING VERY + ADDING STRONG NOUNS 

Students will learn the difference between using the word VERY as compared to using a STRONG NOUN. So instead of 
He was VERY HAPPY we will say:

He was DELIGHTED or
He was ELATED.
***A comprehensive reference list of  strong nouns will be made available.

3. Blasting Ahead With ADJECTIVES  

Students will learn the power of adjectives to boost sentence clarity. For example,
I always enjoy a walk around the lake
I always enjoy a brisk walk around the clear, blue lake.

***A  comprehensive reference list of adjectives will be made available.

4. Starting sentences with  LY words  

Students will learn how to vary the way they start sentences to improve their writing style. For example:

I got an A+ on my math test.
SURPRISINGLY, I got an A+ on my last test.

***A comprehensive list of LY words will be made available.

5. Starting sentences with PREPOSITIONAL words  

Students will learn how to vary the way they start sentences to improve their writing style. For example:

The school bus had left by the time I got to the bus stop.
ON getting to the bus stop the school bus had left.

***A comprehensive list of PREPOSITIONAL words will be made available.
學習目標
Students will learn how 
-to confidently write any type of essay
-use a checklist to ensure they are using the taught structure
- write confidently for any class subject
學習目標

其他詳情

供應清單
Your child will need a dedicated notebook for this class.
I will give access via google docs to reference sheets for different parts of speech introduced.
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學習者無需使用標準 Outschool 工具以外的任何應用程式或網站。
已加入 September, 2021
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I  privately teach writing skills to middle school through high school students and the teaching style I use has been developed and honed over a span of 22 years. All my 5 children have used these same skills to gain admission into their colleges of choice. Four of them are now graduates with the fifth currently in his 2nd year. I also teach this same writing curriculum to adult (post graduate) students.

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每週或US$85 用於 5 課程
每週1次,共 5 週
55 分鐘

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年齡: 9-14
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