Outschool
통화, 시간대 및 언어 설정 열기
로그인

1:1 코칭 부트 캠프로 뛰어난 대학 에세이를 작성하세요

저는 학생들이 자신의 강점, 경험, 목표를 탐구하고 표현하도록 도와서, 그들이 진정성 있고 영향력 있는 개인 서사를 만들어내고 경쟁적인 지원자 풀에서 돋보일 수 있도록 합니다. (전 아이비 리그 입학 심사관/면접관)
Melissa Amaral, M.Ed.
평균 평점:
5.0
수강 후기 수:
(99)
인기 선생님
수업

무엇이 포함되어 있나요?

4개의 라이브 미팅
수업 3 시간
숙제
주당 2-4시간. Homework will be assigned between meetings, which will include essay writing as well as potential activities for further self-reflection. l will set progress goals with input from the student.
보고계신 지문은 자동 번역 되었습니다

수업 소개

영어 수준 - 알 수 없음
미국 10학년 - 12학년 학년
College application essays are unlike your typical high school essays. Most students have not had much experience writing about themselves in a way that showcases their best qualities along with their writing ability. In my three years of working in admissions at an Ivy League university, I have read about two thousand college essays and supplemental statements that run the gamut from unremarkable to extraordinary. How do you write an essay that stands out?

This class for individual coaching is learner-directed; they will determine their pace and make their own decisions. I assign homework after each session tailored to the needs of the student at that time, and I expect that students will work on their essay between our meetings. Follow-up sessions offer opportunities for additional feedback, to review essay progress and homework assignments, and to ask and answer new questions. If the student is satisfied with their essay before completing all four sessions, I encourage them to use our remaining time to work on supplemental essays or short-answer questions, resumes, or writing the activity section of the application.

What you can expect from me:
- I will ask a lot of questions to better understand the student and their goals. 
- I will help the student to identify the theme(s) of their essay, deepen their self-reflection, and make new connections.
- I will point out spelling and grammatical issues.
- I will offer suggestions about the organization and flow of the essay.
- I can help students identify appropriate word choices.
- I will work with the student to determine what their next steps will be and review any updates submitted in a timely manner before class.

Sample schedule for a student at the brainstorming stage:

Day 1: Introduction and self-reflection
- We will discuss different ways to approach college essay writing and what admissions counselors are looking for. The student will engage in a self-reflection activity that helps them to identify major life themes, interests, and connections. We will identify at least three potential essay topics. Homework: Student will choose three essay topics and write at least 5 bullet points for each topic.

Day 2: First draft
- The student will determine which essay topic has the most potential to showcase them in a positive and unique way. We will discuss strategies for writing an effective college essay. Homework: Write and submit at least 250 words of the first draft.

Day 3: Editing
- We will review progress on the first draft and consider ways to better highlight their personal qualities, values, and growth in their essay. Homework: Complete first draft, incorporating feedback received in class.

Day 4: Elevating and polishing 
- In our final session, I will challenge the student to view their essay through the eyes of an admissions counselor. What does their essay convey about them as an individual, a student, and as a potential member of the college community? Have they showcased their writing skills and personal qualities in the best possible light? I will provide feedback and suggestions on their completed draft. Homework: Revise and polish draft by incorporating feedback received in class.

그 외 세부 사항

수업 자료
The learner will provide a draft of the college essay (if applicable) and/or college essay prompts to work on.
수업 진행 언어
영어
Outschool 외 필요 앱/웹사이트
이 수업에서는 아웃스쿨 교실 외에도 다음의 툴을 사용합니다:
가입일: March, 2021
5.0
99수강 후기
인기 선생님
프로필
교사 전문성 및 자격증
I have over a decade of experience working in a variety of roles in higher education. Most relevant is the three years I spent working in admissions at an Ivy League university. I have also volunteered as an alumni admissions interviewer for my alma mater, Brown University. Other roles include academic advising, academic coaching, and teaching.

리뷰

1:1 수업
공유
4 회 수업에

US$300

1주 동안 주당 4회
45분

14 명의 학생이 수업을 완료함
실시간 화상 수업
연령: 15-18

아웃스쿨 소개
고객 지원
안전 정책개인 정보CA 개인 정보어린이 개인정보데이터 기본 설정 관리이용 약관
아웃스쿨 홈페이지
앱 다운로드
앱 스토어에서 다운로드Google Play에서 다운로드
© 2024 아웃스쿨