캠프 퍼펙트 문단
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Jan Bergesen AKA Ms. B
평균 평점:
4.9
수강 후기 수:(911)
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2개의 라이브 미팅
수업 1 시간 20 분 시간숙제
주당 1시간. If the student didn't finish their first draft in the first class, they will be expected to finish it during the week before the second class.보고계신 지문은 자동 번역 되었습니다
수업 소개
영어 수준 - 알 수 없음
미국 3학년 - 6학년 학년
In this 2-day class, we will be learning how to write a GREAT paragraph. Each students will be expected to write a paragraph on their own, but I will model what they need to do. On the first day, each learner will brainstorm what to write about. Then each will come up with the bare bones of a good paragraph - topic sentence, 3 details, conclusion. On the second day, we will take that "good" paragraph, and turn it into a "great" one through revisions - by adding a grabber, switching out boring verbs for more vibrant ones, and adding descriptive adjectives and adverbs.
학습 목표
Students will learn paragraph organization. But more important than that, they will see the importance of putting in a little extra effort and improving on their first draft through varying their sentences, choosing vivid verbs, and adding descriptive adjectives and adverbs.
그 외 세부 사항
수업 자료
Lined paper and pencil
Outschool 외 필요 앱/웹사이트
아웃스쿨 사이트의 기능 외 별도의 앱이나 웹 사이트를 사용할 필요가 없습니다.
가입일: July, 2020
4.9
911수강 후기
교사 전문성 및 자격증
캘리포니아 교직증명서 초등 교육에
Hello, my name is Jan Bergesen, but the kids at school call me Ms. B. I've been an elementary school teacher for 35 years. Through the years, I have successfully developed a variety of unique ways of teaching things many children find difficult. Whether it's multiplication facts, math word problems, how to draw a person, how to write a paragraph or essay, learning to do ventriloquism, or even how to juggle, there's nothing I like more than watching learning happen. Did you notice the juggling in that list? I was a national award winning professional clown for 15 years and can share from those experiences as well. With that kind of a background, you know I like to have a fun, lively, creative class! I'm looking forward to helping your child experience the joy of learning.리뷰
실시간 그룹 수업
2 회 수업에
US$30
1주 동안 주당 2회
40분
1 명의 학생이 수업을 완료함
실시간 화상 수업
연령: 8-12
수업당 학습자 1-5 명
