Párrafo perfecto del campamento
Los estudiantes escribirán un buen párrafo y luego lo convertirán en uno excelente a través de revisiones.
Jan Bergesen AKA Ms. B
Puntuación media:
4.9
Número de reseñas:(907)
Qué está incluido
2 reuniones en vivo
1 horas 20 minutos horas presencialesTarea
1 hora por semana. If the student didn't finish their first draft in the first class, they will be expected to finish it during the week before the second class.Experiencia de clase
Nivel de inglés: desconocido
Grado de EE. UU. 3 - 6
In this 2-day class, we will be learning how to write a GREAT paragraph. Each students will be expected to write a paragraph on their own, but I will model what they need to do. On the first day, each learner will brainstorm what to write about. Then each will come up with the bare bones of a good paragraph - topic sentence, 3 details, conclusion. On the second day, we will take that "good" paragraph, and turn it into a "great" one through revisions - by adding a grabber, switching out boring verbs for more vibrant ones, and adding descriptive adjectives and adverbs.
Metas de aprendizaje
Students will learn paragraph organization. But more important than that, they will see the importance of putting in a little extra effort and improving on their first draft through varying their sentences, choosing vivid verbs, and adding descriptive adjectives and adverbs.
Otros detalles
Lista de útiles escolares
Lined paper and pencil
Recursos externos
Los estudiantes no necesitarán utilizar ninguna aplicación o sitio web más allá de las herramientas estándar de Outschool.
Se unió el July, 2020
4.9
907reseñas
Experiencia y certificaciones del docente
California Certificado de Docencia en Educación elemental
Hello, my name is Jan Bergesen, but the kids at school call me Ms. B. I've been an elementary school teacher for 35 years. Through the years, I have successfully developed a variety of unique ways of teaching things many children find difficult. Whether it's multiplication facts, math word problems, how to draw a person, how to write a paragraph or essay, learning to do ventriloquism, or even how to juggle, there's nothing I like more than watching learning happen. Did you notice the juggling in that list? I was a national award winning professional clown for 15 years and can share from those experiences as well. With that kind of a background, you know I like to have a fun, lively, creative class! I'm looking forward to helping your child experience the joy of learning.Reseñas
Clase grupal
30 US$
por 2 clases2x por semana, 1 semana
40 min
Completado por 1 alumno
Videoconferencias en vivo
Edades: 8-12
1-5 alumnos por clase
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