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私は、学生が自分の強み、経験、目標を探求し、表現できるようサポートします。そうすることで、学生は本物でインパクトのある個人的なストーリーを作り、競争の激しい応募者の中で目立つことができるようになります。(元アイビーリーグの入学審査官/面接官。)
Melissa Amaral, M.Ed.
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4 ライブミーティング
3 授業時間
宿題:
週あたり 2-4 時間. Homework will be assigned between meetings, which will include essay writing as well as potential activities for further self-reflection. l will set progress goals with input from the student.
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英語レベル - 不明
米国の学年 10 - 12
College application essays are unlike your typical high school essays. Most students have not had much experience writing about themselves in a way that showcases their best qualities along with their writing ability. In my three years of working in admissions at an Ivy League university, I have read about two thousand college essays and supplemental statements that run the gamut from unremarkable to extraordinary. How do you write an essay that stands out?

This class for individual coaching is learner-directed; they will determine their pace and make their own decisions. I assign homework after each session tailored to the needs of the student at that time, and I expect that students will work on their essay between our meetings. Follow-up sessions offer opportunities for additional feedback, to review essay progress and homework assignments, and to ask and answer new questions. If the student is satisfied with their essay before completing all four sessions, I encourage them to use our remaining time to work on supplemental essays or short-answer questions, resumes, or writing the activity section of the application.

What you can expect from me:
- I will ask a lot of questions to better understand the student and their goals. 
- I will help the student to identify the theme(s) of their essay, deepen their self-reflection, and make new connections.
- I will point out spelling and grammatical issues.
- I will offer suggestions about the organization and flow of the essay.
- I can help students identify appropriate word choices.
- I will work with the student to determine what their next steps will be and review any updates submitted in a timely manner before class.

Sample schedule for a student at the brainstorming stage:

Day 1: Introduction and self-reflection
- We will discuss different ways to approach college essay writing and what admissions counselors are looking for. The student will engage in a self-reflection activity that helps them to identify major life themes, interests, and connections. We will identify at least three potential essay topics. Homework: Student will choose three essay topics and write at least 5 bullet points for each topic.

Day 2: First draft
- The student will determine which essay topic has the most potential to showcase them in a positive and unique way. We will discuss strategies for writing an effective college essay. Homework: Write and submit at least 250 words of the first draft.

Day 3: Editing
- We will review progress on the first draft and consider ways to better highlight their personal qualities, values, and growth in their essay. Homework: Complete first draft, incorporating feedback received in class.

Day 4: Elevating and polishing 
- In our final session, I will challenge the student to view their essay through the eyes of an admissions counselor. What does their essay convey about them as an individual, a student, and as a potential member of the college community? Have they showcased their writing skills and personal qualities in the best possible light? I will provide feedback and suggestions on their completed draft. Homework: Revise and polish draft by incorporating feedback received in class.

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受講に必要なもの
The learner will provide a draft of the college essay (if applicable) and/or college essay prompts to work on.
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参加しました March, 2021
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I have over a decade of experience working in a variety of roles in higher education. Most relevant is the three years I spent working in admissions at an Ivy League university. I have also volunteered as an alumni admissions interviewer for my alma mater, Brown University. Other roles include academic advising, academic coaching, and teaching.

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$300

4 クラス分
週に4回、 1 週間
45 分

14 人がクラスを受けました
オンラインライブ授業
年齢: 15-18

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