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ライティングの補助輪を外す: 5段落エッセイを超えて

この自分のペースで進められるクラスでは、生徒は標準的な 5 段落のエッセイを超えて文章力を高め、スキルを次のレベルに引き上げることを学びます。
Bill Whitehead, M.Ed.
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4.8
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(54)
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クラス

含まれるもの

4 録画レッスン
4 週間
教師のサポート
1年間のアクセス
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このクラスで学べること

This self-paced class is for students looking to take their writing to the next level and grow beyond the five-paragraph essay established in elementary and middle school.  The five-paragraph essay approach is sound, as it establishes a foundation for students to think about how to organize their thoughts in writing, but it is by no means a recipe for excellence, especially in high school (and beyond).

The class will review the fundamentals of the five-paragraph essay and demonstrate how to stretch beyond the format to further explore & develop ideas in their writing.  

While this is self-paced/asynchronous, students may message me at any time through Outschool with any questions or comments and I will reply asap.  Each lesson will include a video lecture and supplemental notes.

シラバス

4 レッスン
4 週間以上
レッスン 1:
Introduction: Five-Paragraph Essay Pros & Cons
 What five-paragraphs essays do well, and their drawbacks 
レッスン 2:
Planning!
 Developing an outline 
レッスン 3:
Expanding Your Introduction
 How to create more than one paragraph as an "intro"... 
レッスン 4:
Expanding Your Body Paragraphs and Conclusion

その他の情報

指導言語
英語
外部リソース
このクラスでは、Outschool内のクラスルームに加えて、以下を使用します。
  • Youtube
参加しました October, 2021
4.8
54レビュー
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教師の専門知識と資格
マサチューセッツ州 教員免許 英語/国語で
Hello!  My name is Bill and I offer a wide variety of courses that either reinforce the skills found in a traditional English/Humanities class such as writing and public speaking, or fall into more of the "miscellaneous" category, such as basic life skills required to be independent--like creating and maintaining a budget, basic cooking, etc.  I balance out my practical courses (such as "how to interview") with fun offerings meant to reinforce traditional concepts (learning how to start your own business through "Ghostbusters").  In a nutshell, I want to encourage young people to explore and be excited by learning, not simply with the core subjects taught in school, but by everything life has to offer.  Be an active participant; be curious; push yourself--and you'll see how rewarding it is to try something new.

I have my Master's degree in Education and Bachelor's degree in English Literature; I have been teaching since 2008 and have worked with kids of all ages (including my three kids at home).   I believe students learn best when they are treated with respect and engage them at their age level--they shouldn't be talked "down" to and treated younger than they are, but there also needs to be expectations they must meet to demonstrate maturity in thinking and behavior; kids won't learn to be responsible if they aren't given responsibility and the chance to prove themselves.  I work best by interacting in a fun & casual manner; I love to joke with the kids and am lighthearted with my approach as long as everyone is respectful and doing the work (it's pretty simple!).

I am excited to be working with new students from new places and different backgrounds--having a course where people are together across states (and even countries) helps create a sense of a truly connected world--a world where we feel a bit safer knowing we all ultimately want the same thing in life and can help each other make it happen.  I also am excited to use the opportunity to learn new things right along with the kids; I love the idea of running a course where everyone, myself included, determines a new skill or hobby they want to learn, creates a plan, and then makes it happen!  Young people need to see adults humble themselves and say, "hey, I don't know something, but I want to!"

I look forward to working with you and hope you're excited by the courses I will be offering--check back often for any new classes!

-If you're taking a class with me for the first time, use code WHITEQQFYN10 to receive $10 off any one of my offerings.

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