キャンプパーフェクトパラグラフ
生徒は良い段落を書き、その後修正して素晴らしい段落に変えていきます。
Jan Bergesen AKA Ms. B
平均評価:
4.9
レビュー数:(907)
含まれるもの
2 ライブミーティング
1 時間 20 分 授業時間宿題：
週1時間. If the student didn't finish their first draft in the first class, they will be expected to finish it during the week before the second class.この文章は自動翻訳されています
このクラスで学べること
英語レベル - 不明
米国の学年 3 - 6
In this 2-day class, we will be learning how to write a GREAT paragraph. Each students will be expected to write a paragraph on their own, but I will model what they need to do. On the first day, each learner will brainstorm what to write about. Then each will come up with the bare bones of a good paragraph - topic sentence, 3 details, conclusion. On the second day, we will take that "good" paragraph, and turn it into a "great" one through revisions - by adding a grabber, switching out boring verbs for more vibrant ones, and adding descriptive adjectives and adverbs.
学習到達目標
Students will learn paragraph organization. But more important than that, they will see the importance of putting in a little extra effort and improving on their first draft through varying their sentences, choosing vivid verbs, and adding descriptive adjectives and adverbs.
その他の情報
受講に必要なもの
Lined paper and pencil
外部リソース
学習者は、Outschoolが提供する基本ツール以外のアプリやウェブサイトを使用する必要はありません。
参加しました July, 2020
4.9
907レビュー
教師の専門知識と資格
カリフォルニア 教員免許 初等教育で
Hello, my name is Jan Bergesen, but the kids at school call me Ms. B. I've been an elementary school teacher for 35 years. Through the years, I have successfully developed a variety of unique ways of teaching things many children find difficult. Whether it's multiplication facts, math word problems, how to draw a person, how to write a paragraph or essay, learning to do ventriloquism, or even how to juggle, there's nothing I like more than watching learning happen. Did you notice the juggling in that list? I was a national award winning professional clown for 15 years and can share from those experiences as well. With that kind of a background, you know I like to have a fun, lively, creative class! I'm looking forward to helping your child experience the joy of learning.レビュー
ライブグループクラス
$30
2 クラス分週に2回、 1 週間
40 分
1 人がクラスを受けました
オンラインライブ授業
年齢: 8-12
クラス人数： 1 人-5 人
