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Leaves of Learning Academy
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12 ライブミーティング
9 授業時間
宿題:
週1時間. Learners may choose to finish any incomplete work from class, or write additional pieces of writing focusing on the skills from each lesson, and send to the teacher for feedback.
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このクラスで学べること

英語レベル - 不明
米国の学年 4 - 6
Intermediate レベル向け
There are 3 units of writing that will be covered in this class. We will write two narratives, three opinion pieces, and three informative/explanatory pieces. Learners will publish 8 pieces of writing. Learners will submit their writing to the teacher for personalized feedback.

🌟Leaves of Learning Academy is rated "Popular" by Outschool because we are in the top 10% of all teachers on Outschool. This means we offer classes that are in high demand that fill up quickly! 🌟

Here is what one Outschool parent has to say about this class:
💬"I really appreciate how the teacher looks over and writes suggestions on improving my child’s writing and paper. I like how the class is taught to write quality sentences with variations. I think even a beginner writer or reluctant writer can benefit from this class."

Welcome to 4th and 5th Grade Writing Workshop Class, where we'll learn how to make our writing go from ordinary to extraordinary!  Your learner will receive individualized feedback and personalized instruction to help meet their needs and grow as a writer. 

There are 3 units of writing that will be covered in this class. We will write two narratives, three opinion pieces, and three informative/explanatory pieces. Learners will publish 8 pieces of writing. Learners will submit their writing to the teacher for personalized feedback.

Each weekly lesson includes:
-a mini-lesson/instruction
-studying and analyzing a model of that type of writing (mentor text)
-crafting our written piece
-revising and editing activities
-feedback
-publishing activities


Lessons 1-4: Write narratives to develop real or imagined experiences or events using effective technique, descriptive details, and clear event sequences. 

🎯Focus: Elements of Narrative Writing (beginning, middle, end; characters, setting, plot; problem/solution; dialogue)
📖Mini-Lesson: Choose specific, powerful adjectives and verbs; Using figures of speech to make writing more interesting (idioms, similes, metaphors); Using a hook to draw the reader in; Using descriptive details to help the reader visualize the setting and events
✅Skills: Correctly use quotation marks and commas in dialogue; Revise to improve writing
📝Publish: Two narrative pieces



Lessons 5-8: Write informative/explanatory texts to examine a topic and convey ideas and information clearly.  

🎯Focus: Elements of Informative/Explanatory Writing (main idea with supporting relevant details; topic and concluding sentences)
📖Mini-Lesson: Choosing relevant supporting details/information; crafting a strong topic sentence and concluding sentence; Eliminating extra words; Using content specific vocabulary
✅Skills: Use conjunctions to connect clauses, phrases, and words together to create complex sentences; using transition words (additive, adversative, casual, and sequential transition words)
📝Publish: Three informative/explanatory pieces




Lessons 9-12: Write opinion pieces on topics or texts, supporting a point of view with reasons and information.

🎯Focus: Elements of Opinion Paragraphs (supporting an opinion with details; focus on one topic)
📖Mini-Lesson: Make a claim and support with details/information; crafting a strong topic sentence and concluding sentence; facts vs. opinions
✅Skills: Organize ideas, add opinions, support opinions, use transition words
📝Publish: Three opinion pieces



*Leaves of Learning Academy is an organization on Outschool with about 18 teachers. Occasionally, the teacher for this class may not be able to teach and a substitute teacher from the organization will take her place. Only teachers trained to teach this class will serve as a possible substitute for the class. A message will be posted in the Outschool classroom before the class takes place in the event a substitute will be teaching. I am happy to offer a refund to any learner who prefers not to attend the class with a substitute. Please send a message through Outschool in that event and I will issue a refund. Thank you!

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Outschool policies regarding refunds for classes:

✅If your learner misses a class meeting, you are not entitled to a refund. Your teacher may, however, transfer your learner to another available section, or provide a class recording, at their discretion.
✅If your learner has not joined the meeting 10 minutes after the class’s start time, the meeting may be cancelled, at the teacher’s discretion. This is considered a missed meeting and you are not entitled to a refund.
✅Refunds are not guaranteed in the event that your learner misses a past or future class meeting due to a schedule conflict, and will depend on the class-specific refund policy.
✅If your learner’s meeting time changes because of daylight saving time starting or ending for several world regions, you are not entitled to a refund if they’re unable to attend. Please review your learner’s schedule ahead of time to ensure you know when classes are meeting.
学習到達目標
We will publish opinion, informative/explanatory, and narrative paragraphs.
We will learn how to use linking words, descriptive details, and engaging hooks.
学習目標

シラバス

12 レッスン
6 週間以上
レッスン 1:
Elements of Narrative Writing
 Write narratives to develop real or imagined experiences or events using effective technique, descriptive details, and clear event sequences. 

Learners will be able to:
✅name some elements of narrative writing
✅know how to include sensory details/Wow Words to paint a picture with words
✅know how to use complex, detailed sentences to make their writing more interesting
✅know how to add zest to a paragraph with a well-placed idiom 
45 分のオンラインライブレッスン
レッスン 2:
Elements of Narrative Writing
 Write narratives to develop real or imagined experiences or events using effective technique, descriptive details, and clear event sequences. 

Learners will be able to:
✅use elements of narrative writing to write a short story
✅use sensory details/Wow Words to paint a picture with words
✅use complex, detailed sentences to make their writing more interesting 
45 分のオンラインライブレッスン
レッスン 3:
Elements of Narrative Writing
 Write narratives to develop real or imagined experiences or events using effective technique, descriptive details, and clear event sequences. 

Learners will be able to:
✅use elements of narrative writing to revise a short story
✅use similes and metaphors to make their writing more interesting
✅use complex, detailed sentences to make their writing more interesting 
45 分のオンラインライブレッスン
レッスン 4:
Elements of Narrative Writing
 Write narratives to develop real or imagined experiences or events using effective technique, descriptive details, and clear event sequences. 

Learners will be able to:
✅use dialogue to make their writing more interesting
✅use a hook at the beginning of their story to grab the reader’s attention
✅incorporate all of the elements of narrative writing into a short story 
45 分のオンラインライブレッスン

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保護者へのお知らせ
Content is presented on Google Slides
受講に必要なもの
a notebook and a pen or pencil
外部リソース
このクラスでは、Outschool内のクラスルームに加えて、以下を使用します。
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We are a team of dedicated teachers committed to engaging your learner in our online classrooms to support them in participating to their fullest level of comfort, taking risks, reaching their fullest potential, finding success, and SHINING!

Leaves of Learning Academy has served over 6,500 learners to date on Outschool! The teachers with Leaves of Learning Academy are licensed and degreed professional educators with over 100 years of combined experience educating learners in a variety of settings. We are passionate about bringing the highest quality educational experiences to our learners. We strive to provide a welcoming, inclusive online classroom community where all learners' needs are met through a personalized approach to teaching and learning. We use research based instructional strategies to provide the highest quality and most effective learning opportunities for learners ages 5 through 12. Join a class and "come grow with us!"

All classes are designed and created by me, Kelly Hall, owner and founder of Leaves of Learning Academy. Our teachers go through rigorous training to assure that all classes are taught to the same level of quality no matter which one of our teachers is teaching it! I have strict hiring standards and strive to only hire teachers I would feel comfortable teaching my own children on Outschool.

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12 クラス分
週に2回、 6 週間
45 分

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オンラインライブ授業
年齢: 9-12
クラス人数: 1 人-8 人

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