US$20
weeklyor US$120 for all content
撰寫大學論文
年齡 14-18
自訂進度課程
6 預錄課程
6 教師支援週
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1 年內容存取權
立即報名，隨時開始
按照自己的步調走
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包含什麼
6 預錄課程
6 週
教師的支持1 年訪問權
到內容作業
每週 1-2 小時. 3-6 整堂課評估
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課堂經歷
英語程度 - 未知
美國 11 - 12 年級
Navigating the college application process can feel overwhelming, but your personal statement and UC Personal Insight Questions (PIQs) offer a chance to shine. In this six-week course, students will learn how to craft a compelling and authentic college essay that showcases their unique story. This workshop-style course will cover everything from brainstorming and structuring an essay to refining and polishing it for submission. Additionally, students applying to University of California (UC) schools will receive guidance on how to tackle the UC Personal Insight Questions (PIQs), ensuring their responses align with what admissions officers are looking for. By the end of this course, students will have: ✅ A polished Common App personal statement (or other college application essay). ✅ Clear, authentic, and well-crafted UC PIQ responses. ✅ Strong storytelling and editing skills to enhance their applications. ✅ Confidence in their writing and application strategy. Learning Goals: Proofread for errors and polish final drafts. Learn how to adjust essays for different college applications. Gain confidence in submitting applications on time. Activities: Course Takeaways: 🔹 A completed, polished personal statement ready for submission. 🔹 Four UC PIQ responses that showcase personal growth and depth. 🔹 A deep understanding of storytelling for college applications. 🔹 A step-by-step process for tackling future writing tasks.
學習目標
Understand what admissions officers look for in a college essay and UC responses.Understand essay structures: Narrative Arc vs. Montage Style; and how to choose the strongest topic.教學大綱
課程
遵循 Teacher-Created 課程6 課程
超過 6 週課 1:
Understanding the College Essay & UC PIQs
What makes an essay or PIQ response stand out; The difference between a Common App personal statement and UC PIQs;What admissions officers look for in college essays;
The four types of essay topics: Challenge, Passion, Growth, and Identity;
Overview of UC Personal Insight Questions (PIQs) 1 作業
課 2:
Finding Your Story & Understanding Structure
The two main essay structures: Narrative Arc vs. Montage;
What makes a UC PIQ response different from a Common App essay?
Finding your core message: What do you want colleges to learn about you? 課 3:
First Draft – Writing with Voice & Authenticity
Writing a strong hook: First sentences that grab attention;
How to use "show, don’t tell" to bring your story to life;
Finding your unique voice and tone 課 4:
Refining & Strengthening the Message
Improve clarity, coherence, and emotional depth.
Ensure the essay answers: Why does this matter? What does it reveal about you?
Strengthen personal reflection and avoid cliché language. 其他詳情
外部資源
學習者無需使用標準 Outschool 工具以外的任何應用程式或網站。
認識老師
教師專業知識和證書
2 個學位
學士學位 在 政治學與政府 從 University of California Riverside
副學士學位 在 科學 從 Sacramento City College
I have been teaching World History, English 11, and Creative Writing to high school students in grades 9-12 for the past 1.5 years at a private high school, fostering critical thinking, analytical skills, and creative expression. I hold a bachelor's and a master's degree in history and public policy, providing me with a strong foundation in research, historical analysis, and effective communication. Beyond the classroom, I host a life skills cooking channel that combines history with culinary arts, teaching people to cook while exploring historical contexts. This unique approach allows me to connect with diverse learners, making complex topics engaging and accessible both inside and outside the classroom.評論
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