我能寫的任何東西，你都能寫得更好。

To know how to make a piece of writing better, we need to be able to identify what needs improving.
We'll be looking at a (not very!) creative short paragraph, and will work together to spot the elements that aren't really working. As a group, we'll talk about how the paragraph could be improved and what aspects of writing could be included. 
Using the ideas that we talk about as a springboard, students will write their own version of the piece. We will also practice giving constructive suggestions.