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사전 녹화된 수업 6개
6 주
교사 지원 기간(주)1년
학습 내용 이용 기간과제
주당 1-2시간. 수업 중 3-6회학습 평가
An assessment of your essays and tips to improve or revise.보고계신 지문은 자동 번역 되었습니다
수업 소개
영어 수준 - 알 수 없음
미국 11학년 - 12학년 학년
Navigating the college application process can feel overwhelming, but your personal statement and UC Personal Insight Questions (PIQs) offer a chance to shine. In this six-week course, students will learn how to craft a compelling and authentic college essay that showcases their unique story. This workshop-style course will cover everything from brainstorming and structuring an essay to refining and polishing it for submission. Additionally, students applying to University of California (UC) schools will receive guidance on how to tackle the UC Personal Insight Questions (PIQs), ensuring their responses align with what admissions officers are looking for. By the end of this course, students will have: ✅ A polished Common App personal statement (or other college application essay). ✅ Clear, authentic, and well-crafted UC PIQ responses. ✅ Strong storytelling and editing skills to enhance their applications. ✅ Confidence in their writing and application strategy. Learning Goals: Proofread for errors and polish final drafts. Learn how to adjust essays for different college applications. Gain confidence in submitting applications on time. Activities: Course Takeaways: 🔹 A completed, polished personal statement ready for submission. 🔹 Four UC PIQ responses that showcase personal growth and depth. 🔹 A deep understanding of storytelling for college applications. 🔹 A step-by-step process for tackling future writing tasks.
학습 목표
Understand what admissions officers look for in a college essay and UC responses.Understand essay structures: Narrative Arc vs. Montage Style; and how to choose the strongest topic.
강의 계획서
커리큘럼
Teacher-Created 커리큘럼 기반6 레슨
6 주 이상레슨1:
Understanding the College Essay & UC PIQs
What makes an essay or PIQ response stand out; The difference between a Common App personal statement and UC PIQs;What admissions officers look for in college essays;
The four types of essay topics: Challenge, Passion, Growth, and Identity;
Overview of UC Personal Insight Questions (PIQs) 1 과제
레슨2:
Finding Your Story & Understanding Structure
The two main essay structures: Narrative Arc vs. Montage;
What makes a UC PIQ response different from a Common App essay?
Finding your core message: What do you want colleges to learn about you? 레슨3:
First Draft – Writing with Voice & Authenticity
Writing a strong hook: First sentences that grab attention;
How to use "show, don’t tell" to bring your story to life;
Finding your unique voice and tone 레슨4:
Refining & Strengthening the Message
Improve clarity, coherence, and emotional depth.
Ensure the essay answers: Why does this matter? What does it reveal about you?
Strengthen personal reflection and avoid cliché language. 그 외 세부 사항
Outschool 외 필요 앱/웹사이트
아웃스쿨 사이트의 기능 외 별도의 앱이나 웹 사이트를 사용할 필요가 없습니다.
가입일: March, 2025
교사 전문성 및 자격증
2 정도
학사 학위 정치학과 정부 University of California Riverside에서
준학사 학위 과학 Sacramento City College에서
I have been teaching World History, English 11, and Creative Writing to high school students in grades 9-12 for the past 1.5 years at a private high school, fostering critical thinking, analytical skills, and creative expression. I hold a bachelor's and a master's degree in history and public policy, providing me with a strong foundation in research, historical analysis, and effective communication. Beyond the classroom, I host a life skills cooking channel that combines history with culinary arts, teaching people to cook while exploring historical contexts. This unique approach allows me to connect with diverse learners, making complex topics engaging and accessible both inside and outside the classroom.
