Targeted Revision for College Essays
Beth Orsini
Average rating:5.0Number of reviews:(8)
In this one-time one-on-one class, I will offer specific, actionable feedback to make college essays more clear, descriptive, and thoughtful.
Class experience
US Grade 11 - 12
Now is the time of year when many high school seniors are applying to colleges. If you're like most, one of the most stressful parts of this process is writing the essay, or personal statement. Whether you're using the Common App or have a specific question to answer, this is your chance to show the admissions staff WHO YOU ARE. The goal of this one-time class is to take what you already have, and make it better. I will provide specific, targeted feedback for you. Yes, I will help with...
Learners will leave the session with specific revision feedback to continue working on their essays. This could include changes with organization, detail, focus, word choice or sentence structure, author's voice, etc.
Homework Offered
Learners will have revisions to make on their essay. I do not need to see it again unless the learner would like to schedule a follow-up session.0 - 1 hours per week outside of class
Assessments Offered
Written and verbal feedbackGrades Offered
Learner will need to have a working copy of their essay, or at least a brainstorm of possible ideas.
In addition to the Outschool classroom, this class uses:
For me to help with this, the learner will need to share their current work--preferably through Google docs. If the student doesn't have a Google account, they can share it through Outschool as an attachment.
Average rating:5.0Number of reviews:(8)
Hi, I'm Beth! I have been teaching middle school ELA for over 15 years, and am certified for grades 5-12. Reading and writing are two of my greatest passions. I love books so much that I have even opened up my own pop-up bookshop! My classes are...
1-on-1 Tutoring
$75
per sessionMeets on demand
45 min
Completed by 1 learner
Live video meetings
Ages: 16-18
