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Stop the Essay Stress, Pt 4: Make Your Last Stand | Convincing Essay Conclusions

Conclusions can be challenging for many students. In this one-time class, we break down how to write clear, concise, and well-organized conclusions that help your young writer make one last stand for their thoughts.
New Horizons Academy - SAT & ACT Prep - ELA
Average rating:
4.8
Number of reviews:
(307)
Class

What's included

1 live meeting
45 mins in-class hours

Class Experience

US Grade 6 - 9
Does your learner struggle with writing essay conclusions? 

They are certainly not alone.

In my years of teaching writing to students in middle school up to senior AP, I have found essay conclusions to be a major stumbling block to many of my new students. However, there is good news. It doesn't have to be that way!

In this class, we will demystify the conclusion-writing process, breaking it down step by step and bit by bit. 

We Will Cover:
- The Elements of a Conclusion
- How to Rephrase Your Thesis
- How to Provide the Best Supporting Evidence
- How to Leave Your Reader Thinking About Your Essay for Days

During class, we will learn about each of the elements above, learning both why they are important and how to create them. Examples will be shared to see the new skills modeled.

We will put them all together in an easy-to-use graphic organizer at the end of class so students can clearly see how these parts come together into a conclusion that lets your young writer make their last stand.

There are other Outschool classes in this learning path:
1. Your Thesis Roadmap
https://bit.ly/ThesisRoadmap
2. Set the Stage | Learn to Write Powerful and Organized Essay Introductions
http://bit.ly/SetTheStageIntros
3. Idea Islands | Write Body Paragraphs to Take Readers on a Well Thought-Out Tour
http://bit.ly/IdeaIslands

Learning Goals

Students will improve overall conclusion writing skills including:
- The Elements of a Conclusion
- How to Rephrase Your Thesis* (*As important as thesis writing is, another of my classes is devoted entirely to thesis writing. Please follow this link to see that Outschool course: https://bit.ly/ThesisRoadmap .)
- How to Provide the Best Supporting Evidence
- How to Leave Your Reader Thinking About Your Essay for Days
learning goal

Other Details

Parental Guidance
*As important as thesis writing is, another of my classes is devoted entirely to thesis writing. Please follow this link to see that Outschool course: https://bit.ly/ThesisRoadmap . At New Horizons Academy, we understand how difficult setting your family's schedule can be, juggling everyone's activities and classes. To honor that time commitment, we are proud to be able to offer another of our organization's Outschool-approved and trained teachers (Mrs. Becky, Teacher Carissa, Ms. Monica, or Teacher Donna) in the rare occurrence of teacher illnesses or urgent personal events. This will allow you to keep your schedule in-tact as much as possible and keep the learning going! --- External Resource: Lumio by SMART Lumio by SMART is an interactive lesson resource similar to Nearpod that engages learners through polls, games, sharing, as well as workspaces for individuals, groups, and the whole class! It’s a great way to elevate the learning experience. To join class, students will: 1. Go to hellosmart.com. 2. Students can connect to class by signing in with their Google or Microsoft accounts, or they can join as GUESTS with a lesson code and simply type in their names/nicknames. 3. If students would like to access the lesson outside of class time, they can either access the student-paced lesson link by signing in with a Google or Microsoft account, or accessing the PDF resources in the Outschool classroom.
Supply List
A two-page digital handout is provided for students to use on future writing projects that includes a brainstorming chart, notes, and key slide images.
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Teacher expertise and credentials
Bachelor's Degree in English from Emporia State University
Brittney Shaw
𝐀𝐛𝐨𝐮𝐭 𝐁𝐞𝐜𝐤𝐲 𝐙𝐞𝐫𝐫
Teaching--especially in English, writing, and language arts--is a true passion of mine. I graduated Cum Laude from Kansas State University in 2010 with a Secondary Education degree in English and Journalism, and then went on to teach in the public schools before setting off on my own as an online teacher and tutor.

My philosophy of education is to make it as fun, personalized, and as interactive as possible for the kids. I always try to even out my direct instruction/lecture time with plenty of opportunities for students to practice these new skills, take polls, play review games, and collaborate with peers.

I am happily married to my husband Brad, and we have two beautiful daughters, Sophia and Elise. We currently reside in Kansas in a small town, and we love the small town life.

Oh, and Zerr is pronounced "Zarr," so it rhymes with "car." 😉

𝐀𝐛𝐨𝐮𝐭 𝐌𝐨𝐧𝐢𝐜𝐚 𝐖𝐢𝐧𝐤𝐥𝐞𝐫

Hi there! I'm Monica and I teach reading, vocabulary, and writing classes. I recently finished graduate school in linguistics. 

I grew up speaking English, Spanish, and Swiss German at home, so I've been surrounded by several languages from a young age. Whether I am studying the history of a word, or what language can tell us about its speakers, I am endlessly curious about language. I have experience teaching linguistics courses at the university level, as well as teaching writing, reading, and English as a second language online. I'm so excited to share my passion for language and to learn with and from my students!

My teaching philosophy is that every student comes into the classroom with knowledge. It's my job, as a teacher, to leverage what they already know to help them achieve their goals.
Outside of the classroom, you can find me at the beach, or out in nature. I love to spend my free time reading, writing, and with my friends and family. Oh, and playing with my cat, Biscuit!
I'm looking forward to seeing you in class! 😊

𝐀𝐛𝐨𝐮𝐭 𝐃𝐨𝐧𝐧𝐚 𝐌𝐜𝐄𝐥𝐡𝐞𝐧𝐲

Hello! My name is Donna (students often call me Teacher Donna) and I am so excited to meet you!

I have a Bachelor's Degree in Education with a concentration in English, an active teaching certificate, and am currently in the process of working on my Master's Degree as a Reading Specialist.

I teach English Language Arts with New Horizons Academy and stay home with my own four young kiddos. My kids (ages 10, 8, 6, and 3) keep me on my toes and help me to come up with new and fun lessons to bring into the classroom for your own little learners. I love teaching children of all ages and am looking forward to becoming your child's teacher.

My personal teaching philosophy is "We are Lifelong Learners!" I want to foster a love of learning in my classroom through engaging, fun, and creative lessons.  I hope to see you in my classroom very soon! ✨

𝐀𝐛𝐨𝐮𝐭 𝐁𝐫𝐢𝐭𝐭𝐧𝐞𝐲 𝐒𝐡𝐚𝐰

Hi! My name is Brittney. I received my Associates Degree in Elementary Education and my Bachelors Degree in English. I love working with kids and have experience with all ages. 

I am a wife and mother of four, ages 9, 6, 4, and 1, and the oldest of eight. I have been both a nanny and babysitter as well. Through my past employment and own kids, have gained experience with children with speech delays, autism, and ADHD. I have also worked as a classroom volunteer and ESL instructor. 

I love reading and writing and am a total bookworm. I also love dogs and cooking. My kitchen and my reading chair are my happy places! 

My teaching philosophy is that every child is different and my job is to make sure to embrace those differences to make the education experience the best for all the children. I also want to make sure I do my best to foster a love of reading in my students because, "if you can read, you can do anything!"

Qualifications:
-Associates in Elementary Education
-Bachelors in English
-Former ESL instructor
-Experience with all ages

𝐀𝐛𝐨𝐮𝐭 𝐑𝐞𝐛𝐞𝐜𝐜𝐚 𝐖𝐚𝐫𝐭𝐡𝐞𝐧

Hi! My name is Rebecca and I'm from South Carolina in the USA. I've been teaching for over 9 years, both in the classroom and online. 

I graduated from the College of Charleston with a Bachelor's degree in Sociology and a minor in Psychology. This background helps me to relate to students from all walks of life. I earned my ESL teaching certification from Oxford Seminars in 2013.  

I have taught English in New York City, Nicaragua, and Thailand as a US Peace Corps teacher.  I've also taught students online from countries like China, Japan, and all over Central and South America. I speak conversational Thai and Spanish. 

In addition to teaching English, I also teach dance! I enjoy cooking, being active outdoors, and making crafts.

I look forward to meeting you soon!

Qualifications:
- BS College of Charleston
- 100 Hour TEFL/ TESL/ TESOL Certification - Oxford Seminars
- 9 years of experience

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$12

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Meets once
45 min

Completed by 7 learners
Live video meetings
Ages: 11-16
2-6 learners per class

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