Paragraph Writing Made Simple
We will use a Hamburger Graphic Organizer to help students organize their ideas into a cohesive paragraph.
Christian Adams
Average rating:
4.9
Number of reviews:(239)
What's included
1 live meeting
55 mins in-class hoursHomework
1 hour per week. Students may have a small amount of homework, which would be to finish completing their paragraph, if they did not have enough time to finish it in class.Class Experience
US Grade 4 - 5
We will use a hamburger graphic organizer that makes writing fun, and breaks it into simple step-by-step parts, that are easy to follow. The Hamburger Graphic Organizer is a writing organizer that visually outlines the key components of a paragraph. Topic sentence, detail sentences, and a closing sentence are the main elements of a good paragraph, and each one forms a different "piece" of the hamburger. We will discuss the three main components of a paragraph: The introduction (top bun) The supporting details (meat, lettuce, tomato) The conclusion (bottom bun) The students will write a topic sentence that clearly indicates what the whole paragraph is going to be about. Then they will compose several supporting sentences that give more information about the topic. Students will then write a concluding sentence that restates the topic sentence. The lesson is taught through a presentation, discussion, and group & individual activities, where all students are able to participate. Students will be shown examples of well-written paragraphs and we will identify the parts. Then we will write our own paragraphs.
Learning Goals
The students will learn to use the Hamburger Graphic Organizer to write a paragraph that includes an introductory sentence, detail sentences, and a concluding sentence.
Other Details
Supply List
Students will need to print out the graphic organizers, and have a few pieces of lined paper, a pencil, and an eraser.
2 files available upon enrollment
External Resources
Learners will not need to use any apps or websites beyond the standard Outschool tools.
Joined February, 2019
4.9
239reviews
Teacher expertise and credentials
Bachelor's Degree in Education from Slippery Rock University
Hello! My name is Christian Adams.
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I’m an experienced educator with over 20 years in teaching, including 10 years of tutoring children ages 8-15 in Math, Grammar & Writing, and Reading.
For the past 6 years, I’ve been working with students online at Outschool, focusing on simplifying essential skills in a fun and engaging way.
I hold Bachelor’s Degrees in Elementary and Special Education and am a certified K-8 Florida Professional Teacher. My approach centers on creating a positive, relaxed learning environment where children feel comfortable asking for help. I’m dedicated to addressing all learning needs and styles because I believe every child can succeed.
I transitioned from the classroom to focus on my own tutoring business, which allows me to work one-on-one with students, helping them grow and achieve their goals. I specialize in tutoring homeschoolers and unschoolers aged 8-15 in Math, Reading, and Grammar/Writing, as well as offering after-school support for classroom students. My group classes, especially my book clubs, are always a hit.
Outside of teaching, I enjoy reading, hiking, going to the beach, and coaching basketball. I’m passionate about making learning enjoyable and accessible, and I hope to see you in one of my private tutoring sessions soon!
Thanks for stopping by.
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Live One-Time Class
$20
per classMeets once
55 min
Completed by 2 learners
Live video meetings
Ages: 9-11
3-6 learners per class
