$44
for 2 classesLanguage Workout Five –Editing and Revision Skills
Completed by 10 learners
Ages 9-14
Live Group Class
Live video meetings
2x per week, 1 week
2-6 learners per class
50 min
What's included
2 live meetings
1 hrs 40 mins in-class hoursClass Experience
US Grade 4 - 7
Learners will be practicing increasingly difficult editing and revision skills including, but not limited to, spelling, contractions, homonyms and homophones, figurative language, punctuation, proper paragraphs, replacement words for said, and usage of more precise language. Learners will be working with the instructor in a fun participatory manner learning together to edit and revise with increased accuracy and discussing each section of the work as a group. We are able to have a lot of fun and learn at the same time. Please note that there are four other levels of language workouts and, while they increase in complexity and may be taken in any order, this class definitely presents the most challenge. Language Workout class may be taken in any order. Please note this class is not for learner's under the age of 9. Thank you.
Learning Goals
Learners will be studying and practicing editing and revising skills including spelling, contractions, homonyms, homophones, dialogue, figurative language, punctuation, proper paragraphs, and more. Revision includes replacement of words, strengthening dialogue, including stronger words for said and being able to show increased emotion and voice
Other Details
External Resources
Learners will not need to use any apps or websites beyond the standard Outschool tools.
Sources
A packet will be sent as an attachment to your learner's outschool email approximately 3 days ahead of time. Please print it for usage in the class and please don't have the learner started ahead of time.
Please also Google on the internet ways to say said and print one of the pages with examples of various ways to say said without using said.
Meet the teacher
Teacher expertise and credentials
2 Degrees
Master's Degree in Education from The College of St. Rose
Bachelor's Degree in Psychology from Union College
There is nothing more exciting than when you see a student think deeply, question ideas, share a new thought, or explore character’s actions/ decisions or a quote or a purpose the author had when writing a novel and then connect the information to learner’s own story in life. Helping students reach their full potential, and beyond, in a setting that is safe, exciting, creative and funny is what teaching is all about to me. The climate has to be one that is free from bullying, pressure, and negative interactions and, instead, is one that students can’t wait to get to as they know the time in that class will be rewarding, creative, stimulating, and allow them to be who they really are and share what they want to share. There is nothing more exciting, as a teacher, then when that light bulb illuminates and a student feels confident to share and take an idea, quote, author’s purpose or decision from a book and see how it can affect real life or when a learner sees their full potential, in the written word they create.
We can make literature, come alive in a really fun, fast-paced active discussion filled atmosphere.
My background professionally is having taught third grade, fifth grade, and Sixth grade language arts for 33 years with a background in psychology, elementary education, school administration and an extensive background in overnight camping.My favorite teaching topics include writing poetry, creative and nonfiction writing, and reading/sharing outstanding literature with discussions that bring critical thinking skills and life lessons to the students. I am excited to bring this teaching to an environment that is bully free with motivated students in a small group setting.I always look forward to reading my students work as I see such brilliance in people of this age.
I can be found in the upstate NY, most often being out on the lake in my boat from spring to fall (I love being on water!), playing guitar and singing, collecting Pez, reading , cooking and baking, volunteering in the community as often as I can to make things better for others, and spending lots of time with Derby, the wonder dog, my amazingly bright and talented rescue dog who undoubtably will make visits into the virtual classroom. I also enjoy bike riding, yoga, and meditation. Most importantly, I place great emphasis on finding ways, small and big ways, that will allow my students and myself to make our mark in this world and make it a better place for others. The small ways are most often the best ways and I believe students are brilliant people who can absolutely change the world.
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