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Superb Sentences & Dazzling Descriptions

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Dana Lorelle, Writing, Vocabulary, Essays
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In this self-paced (video-based) course on basic writing, we'll move from basic to advanced concepts by breaking sentences down into simple subjects and predicates.... and then building them up (the right way!) into stunning creations!

Class experience

US Grade 2 - 5
Beginner Level
4 lessons//4 Weeks
 Week 1
Lesson 1
Subjects & predicates
We'll cover subjects, predicates, and the idea that a sentence has to make sense (although we might have a sentence about an old brown cow rowing a boat, so "make sense" doesn't mean we won't have fun!).
 Week 2
Lesson 2
Conjunctions
We've covered how to write a complete sentence. But what about writing longer sentences? We'll work on using conjunctions to join thoughts... and then we'll examine how to correct sentences that are just way too long by identifying run-on sentences and devising strategies to fix them.
 Week 3
Lesson 3
Adjectives, adverbs, and dependent clauses
Now that we know how to write grammatically correct sentences, we need to transform these "stick-figure sentences" into "painting sentences"! We'll add adjectives, adverbs, and dependent clauses to fashion some truly superb sentences.
 Week 4
Lesson 4
Descriptive writing
Now that we've learned the steps to writing strong sentences, we'll add to that knowledge by focusing on how to write descriptively. An apple isn't just red: it's juicy, crunchy, sweet, and possibly wormy. Using pictures, we will start with basic sentences and build them up to dazzling descriptions that are full of sensory details.
Students will improve both in mechanics and content of basic writing. 
My passion -- as well as my professional background -- is writing. Professionally, I hold a B.A. in Journalism from the University of North Carolina at Chapel Hill, and I've been published in numerous newspapers and magazines. I've also taught writing and literature classes to students of all ages and abilities. This FLEX class is a similar version of the very popular live class Superb Sentences. 

On a personal note, I have homeschooled all five of my children and taught them all to read and write... and with each it has been a different experience! What's easy for one child is not easy for another. When I teach online, I always remember that it's important to keep learning fun and to incorporate different methods of teaching to reach all my students. 
Homework Offered
Students will have several worksheets and Nearpod exercises as optional work.
0 - 1 hours per week outside of class
Assessments Offered
Grades Offered
In addition to the Outschool classroom, this class uses:
Three of the lessons include an optional Nearpod activity, which requires parental approval. 
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Average rating:5.0Number of reviews:(1,215)
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***Use coupon code LORELLE20245 for $5 off any class.***

Welcome! I'm here because I love writing, reading, and teaching, and through Outschool I'm able to blend all three. I offer classes in writing and literature analysis (especially poetry),... 
Self-Paced Class

$13

weekly or $50 for all content
4 pre-recorded lessons
4 weeks of teacher feedback
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1 year of access to the content

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