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Essay Writing Preparation: The 'Hamburger' Paragraph

Completed by 1960 learners
Ages 9-14
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This course will teach the 'hamburger' paragraph writing method for body paragraphs along with how to properly develop an introduction and conclusion for a complete essay.
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Live video meetings
1x per week, 2 weeks
3-11 learners per class
25 min

What's included

2 live meetings
50 mins in-class hours
Homework
1 hour per week. Week One: Learners will write and submit a body paragraph. Week Two: Learners will write and submit a three paragraph essay.
Assessment
All submitted work receives feedback both in text and on a rubric or checklist.
Grading
Grades will be provided upon request. The essay will receive feedback in the form of in-text comments and a rubric.

Class Experience

US Grade 4 - 7
Beginner - Intermediate Level
Learners will learn the 'hamburger' paragraph method (topic sentence, supporting details, and closing sentence).
Writing prompts will be provided.  Work will be assigned and submitted work will receive feedback.

Learning how to write an essay is essential because it builds a foundation for clear and organized communication. Through essay writing, individuals develop critical thinking skills and learn to present their ideas in a structured format. Each paragraph must have a purpose, and mastering this helps develop the needed skills to communicate clearly.

𝐂𝐥𝐚𝐬𝐬 𝟏: 𝐓𝐡𝐞 𝐏𝐚𝐫𝐚𝐠𝐫𝐚𝐩𝐡
Students will be introduced to the structure of writing a paragraph.
We will work on topic sentences, supporting details, and the closing sentence.
Students will practice identifying the different parts in a paragraph.
Students will select a prompt and submit their paragraph.

Learners will learn how to write an introduction with a hook, background information, and a thesis along with the 'upside down introduction' for the conclusion.

𝐂𝐥𝐚𝐬𝐬 𝟐: 𝐓𝐡𝐞 𝐄𝐬𝐬𝐚𝐲
Students will learn how to structure an introduction and conclusion.
Introduction: (the hook/attention-getter) and writing a thesis statement.
Conclusion:  I will teach the 'upside-down' introduction method.
Students will learn about the basic outline format.
The students will be given three options for their writing prompt.
Students will complete and submit an essay.
All work submitted on time will be reviewed.


*There is nothing that needs to be printed prior to class.  All class material will be made available after each class.

While this class primarily relies on lectures to deliver content, it is designed to be interactive and engaging. Throughout the class, there will be ample opportunities for interaction through questioning to ensure understanding and engagement. Review sessions will also be incorporated to reinforce and practice what was learned.

In addition to structured lessons, learners will be provided with writing prompts to guide their practice. However, they may explore topics of personal interest and creativity if they prefer. This flexibility allows learners to tailor their writing experience to their individual preferences.

Learning Goals

Identify and apply the components of an effective introduction and conclusion.
Practice writing clear and concise thesis statements.

Syllabus

2 Lessons
over 2 Weeks
Lesson 1:
𝐂𝐥𝐚𝐬𝐬 𝟏: 𝐓𝐡𝐞 𝐏𝐚𝐫𝐚𝐠𝐫𝐚𝐩𝐡
 Students will be introduced to the structure of writing a paragraph.
We will work on topic sentences, supporting details, and the closing sentence.
Students will practice identifying the different parts in a paragraph.
Students will select a prompt and submit their paragraph. 
25 mins online live lesson
Lesson 2:
𝐂𝐥𝐚𝐬𝐬 𝟐: 𝐓𝐡𝐞 𝐄𝐬𝐬𝐚𝐲
 Students will learn how to structure an introduction and conclusion.
Introduction: (the hook/attention-getter) and writing a thesis statement.
Conclusion:  I will teach the 'upside-down' introduction method.
Students will learn about the basic outline format.
The students will be given three options for their writing prompt.
Students will complete and submit an essay.
All work submitted on time will be reviewed. 
25 mins online live lesson

Other Details

Learning Needs
Please communicate with the instructor if accommodations or modifications are needed. Academy teachers are trained and educated on how to meet unique learning needs and classes can be adjusted as needed.
Supply List
PPT, examples, and graphic organizer templates will be uploaded for each session.

Writing program or application to submit assignments (.doc, .docx, .pdf, .pages, .rtf, .txt, GoogleDocs, etc) or the assignments may be typed directly in the chatbox options.
External Resources
Learners will not need to use any apps or websites beyond the standard Outschool tools.

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Teacher expertise and credentials
Master's Degree in Education from University of Minnesota
(Teacher) Jade W. | M.Ed. & Licensed Instructor
Bachelor's Degree in Sociology from University of Tennessee Knoxville
Aliya Benabderrazak
Bachelor's Degree in History from University of Minnesota
(Teacher) Jade W. | M.Ed. & Licensed Instructor
𝗧𝗲𝗮𝗰𝗵𝗲𝗿 𝗝𝗮𝗱𝗲 (𝗙𝗼𝘂𝗻𝗱𝗲𝗿):
I started my path to teaching in college when I volunteered with AmeriCorps.  I went on to teach in traditional public schools after I completed my M.Ed and received my teaching license, but I quickly learned the school environment was not the ideal setting for myself or my child.  That is when I transitioned to homeschooling and teaching online.  I have been teaching writing course for fifteen years.  My primary objective in each class is to help the learners feel comfortable and gain confidence in their writing.

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