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Descriptive Writing: Turning Dull Sentences Into Vivid, Descriptive Ones

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Ages 7-11
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This 3 day course teaches your learner to turn dull, boring sentences into rich, descriptive ones with vivid detail. Using quality examples, modeling, fun activities, and lots of hands-on practice, student’s sentences go from drab to fab!
Average rating:
5.0
Number of reviews:
(99 reviews)

Live video meetings
3x per week, 1 week
3-6 learners per class
55 min

What's included

3 live meetings
2 hrs 45 mins in-class hours
Assignments
1 hour per week. included
Grading
Written feedback about the progress of your student in the course.

Class Experience

US Grade 2 - 4
This is a sweet lesson with a big impact designed to help young writers develop their word choice and use of descriptive language. Skills and techniques learned here can be applied to all areas of creative writing, enabling students to write purposefully with more vivid detail, eliminating the dull, boring sentences of the past.

 This class is for students with writing experience that are ready to transform dull sentences into interesting, descriptive ones. Using a slide show I share on my screen, a shared story, activities, worksheets, discussion,and independent writing practice, this will be an engaging, hands-on, interactive course your student is sure to enjoy.

Studying language and word choice that is used to convey ideas and feelings in creative ways, and learning how to use descriptive language to create powerful imagery, students will be inspired to transform sentences of their very own. Students will practice turning dull sentences into creative, descriptive sentences with modeling, support, and feedback. Finally, students will have the opportunity to put these new skills to use by doing written responses to themed prompts associated with the lesson. 

This fun course will be taught in a structured and meaningful way, giving students ample support, encouragement, and practice to help them master these new creative writing skills.

Learning Goals

Identify descriptive writing techniques
Use descriptive writing techniques to transform your dull sentences into more interesting ones

Syllabus

Curriculum
Follows Teacher-Created Curriculum
Standards
Aligned with Common Core State Standards (CCSS)
3 Lessons
over 1 Week
Lesson 1:
What is descriptive language?
 Studying a beautiful text, we will identify ways the author turned potentially dull sentences into descriptive ones to help readers visualize the story. Once defined, search for specific examples of descriptive sentences and determine techniques used 
55 mins online live lesson
Lesson 2:
Review and practice turning dull sentences into descriptive ones.
 Using techniques we have studied, practice turning dull sentences into creative, descriptive ones of your own. Then, practice writing a descriptive paragraph on a given prompt 
55 mins online live lesson
Lesson 3:
Descriptive writing review and application
 After review and practice activities, students apply their new descriptive writing techniques by writing a short, descriptive story on a given topic. We finish with a visual drawing activity to illustrate the importance of descriptive details in writing. 
55 mins online live lesson

Other Details

Parental Guidance
No additional sources will be needed for this class
Supply List
~ Worksheets linked in the classroom
~ Pencil with eraser
~ A good attitude
External Resources
Learners will not need to use any apps or websites beyond the standard Outschool tools.
Sources
I will refer to the book, Fireflies by Julie Brinckloe, but your student does not need a copy.

Meet the teacher

Joined July, 2020
5.0
99reviews
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Teacher expertise and credentials
Master's Degree in Education from University of South Florida
I have a Masters degree in Elementary Education, years of experience teaching 2nd and 3rd grade in the classroom, and years of experience teaching language arts and ESL on line to more than 1,400 students of varying ages. I have a passion for teaching, and a love of writing, adventuring, and reading in my free time. 

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