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Camp Perfect Paragraph

Students will write a good paragraph, then turn it into a great one through revisions.
Jan Bergesen AKA Ms. B
823 total reviews for this teacher
New class
year olds
learners per class


Charged upfront
$15 per class
Meets 2x per week
Over 1 week
40 minutes per class
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Class Experience

Students will learn paragraph organization.  But more important than that, they will see the importance of putting in a little extra effort and improving on their first draft through varying their sentences, choosing vivid verbs, and adding descriptive adjectives and adverbs.
If the student didn't finish their first draft in the first class, they will be expected to finish it during the week before the second class.
Lined paper and pencil
Learners will not need to use any apps or websites beyond the standard Outschool tools.
1 hour 20 minutes per week in class, and an estimated 0 - 1 hours per week outside of class.


Jan Bergesen AKA Ms. B
Lives in the United States
Elementary School Teacher
823 total reviews
1476 completed classes

About Me

Hello, my name is Jan Bergesen, but the kids at school call me Ms. B.  I've been an elementary school teacher for 35 years.  Through the years, I have successfully developed a variety of unique ways of teaching things many children find difficult.... 
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