Camp Perfect Paragraph
Jan Bergesen AKA Ms. B
Average rating:4.9Number of reviews:(880)
Students will write a good paragraph, then turn it into a great one through revisions.
Class experience
US Grade 3 - 6
In this 2-day class, we will be learning how to write a GREAT paragraph. Each students will be expected to write a paragraph on their own, but I will model what they need to do. On the first day, each learner will brainstorm what to write about. Then each will come up with the bare bones of a good paragraph - topic sentence, 3 details, conclusion. On the second day, we will take that "good" paragraph, and turn it into a "great" one through revisions - by adding a grabber, switching out...
Students will learn paragraph organization. But more important than that, they will see the importance of putting in a little extra effort and improving on their first draft through varying their sentences, choosing vivid verbs, and adding descriptive adjectives and adverbs.
Homework Offered
If the student didn't finish their first draft in the first class, they will be expected to finish it during the week before the second class.0 - 1 hours per week outside of class
Assessments Offered
Grades Offered
Lined paper and pencil
Learners will not need to use any apps or websites beyond the standard Outschool tools.
Average rating:4.9Number of reviews:(880)
Hello, my name is Jan Bergesen, but the kids at school call me Ms. B. I've been an elementary school teacher for 35 years. Through the years, I have successfully developed a variety of unique ways of teaching things many children find difficult....
Group Class
$30
for 2 classes2x per week, 1 week
40 min
Completed by 1 learner
Live video meetings
Ages: 8-12
1-5 learners per class
