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A Cut Above Grammar Camp: Intro to Sophisticated Writing

Take your writing to the next level! In this intensive writing class, students focus on their sentences so that syntax is not only complete, functional, and correct, but beautiful. Write so that you stand out!
Lemons-Aid Learning
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2 live meetings
50 mins in-class hours
Mastery Evaluation
1 hour per week. 1-2 throughout the class
Progress Report
1 after class completion

Class Experience

US Grade 9 - 12
Beginner - Advanced Level
Often neglected but desperately needed, direct teaching in sentence construction all the way through high school will help students stand out. 

As they move through middle school and high school, their speech becomes more sophisticated as should their writing. Learners have trouble transferring the grammar knowledge they have learned in isolation, so they often struggle with sentence syntax, punctuation, and other mechanics as they go into high school. By manipulating sentence parts and learning about function and style, students put grammar to work. 

Using the masters, those published, professional authors, as our models, we study the form, function, and aesthetics of sentences. This helps students write, but amazingly, it even helps them analyze literature. 

This class is a two-day sample of the ongoing class, "State of the Art: Putting Grammar to Work to Write Something Beautiful" (see link below). That class continues throughout the school year. We have found that students need to be immersed in this practice with lots of repetition and instructor feedback to master these skills. Becoming competent in this area will make them stand out far and above other writers. The will be a cut above!
https://outschool.com/classes/state-of-the-art-putting-grammar-to-work-to-write-something-beautiful-UZk0J5dm?usid=0BAnv5zn&signup=true&utm_campaign=share_activity_link

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๐˜›๐˜ฆ๐˜ข๐˜ค๐˜ฉ๐˜ฆ๐˜ณ ๐˜๐˜ฆ๐˜ฆ๐˜ฅ๐˜ฃ๐˜ข๐˜ค๐˜ฌ--The back-and-forth work between a student and teacher significantly benefits a student if done well. We follow best practices in designing class time, assignments, and routines. According to Pennington Publishing, effective writing feedback (or grading) is:
โ€ข Specific, not general
โ€ข Immediate, not postponed
โ€ข Routine with a revision / feedback cycle
โ€ข Explanatory
โ€ข The right amount
โ€ข Targeted to the most critical issues
โ€ข Varied (written, audio, and video comments)
โ€ข Holding students accountable

๐ŸŽฅ To see teacher introduction videos, go to the Lemons-Aid profile page where you can view the video and also read bios. 
https://outschool.com/teachers/Karen-Lemons?usid=0BAnv5zn&signup=true&authTrigger=follow_teacher&follow=true&utm_campaign=share_leader_link
Learning Goals
Students will learn to write sentences for function, purpose, and aesthetics.
learning goal

Syllabus

Curriculum
Follows Teacher-Created Curriculum
Standards
Aligned with State-Specific Standards
2 Lessons
over 1 Week
Lesson 1:
Chunking Sentences
 Students learn to see sentences as a combination of "chunks." 
25 mins online live lesson
Lesson 2:
Using Phrases with Sophistication
 Students learn how to manipulate participial phrases in sentences for variety and style. 
25 mins online live lesson

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External Resources
Learners will not need to use any apps or websites beyond the standard Outschool tools.
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Teacher expertise and credentials
Pennsylvania Teaching Certificate in English/Language Arts
Kimberly Parinisi
New York Teaching Certificate in English/Language Arts
Kimberly Parinisi
Pennsylvania Teaching Certificate in English/Language Arts
Jenn Riale
Tennessee Teaching Certificate in English/Language Arts
Elizabeth Leavitt
Washington Teaching Certificate in English/Language Arts
Karen Lemons
Washington Teaching Certificate in Social Studies/History
Karen Lemons
Washington Teaching Certificate in Foreign Language
Karen Lemons
Missouri Teaching Certificate
Ali Marie
Tennessee Teaching Certificate in Science
Danielle Mortimore
Master's Degree in Education from Carson Newman University
Elizabeth Leavitt
Master's Degree in Education from Liberty University
Karen Lemons
Master's Degree in Education from Western Governors University
Danielle Mortimore
Bachelor's Degree from Purdue University
Becky Padgett
Bachelor's Degree in Education from Philadelphia College of Bible
Kimberly Parinisi
Bachelor's Degree in Education from Millersville University
Jenn Riale
Bachelor's Degree in Education from Liberty University
Kristen Freeman
Bachelor's Degree in English from Florida State University
Karen Lemons
Bachelor's Degree in Early Childhood Education from Missouri State University
Ali Marie
Bachelor's Degree in Music from Western Connecticut State University
Blake Dahlmeyer
Bachelor's Degree in Political Science and Government from Patrick Henry College
Brian Smyth
Bachelor's Degree in Biology/Biological Sciences from Middle Tennessee State University
Danielle Mortimore
Bachelor's Degree in Mathematics from University of Northwestern - St. Paul
Kendra Mancuso
The founder of Lemons-Aid, Mrs. Lemons has a B.A. in English and an M.Ed in Education Administration. She is certified to teach English, has a principal's license, and has many years of experience at every level. She also supervises teachers in their undergraduate and graduate level teacher preparation programs at Colorado Christian University. She is a teacher of teachers. 

All teachers who teach this class have an appropriate degree, teaching experience, and training, giving your learner a teacher who is a  content-area expert who loves kids. Mrs. Lemons is very selective and only hires the very best. They are star teachers!

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for 2 classes
2x per week, 1 week
25 min

Completed by 95 learners
Live video meetings
Ages: 14-16
3-9 learners per class

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